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Teacher Feedback for Mag
ad’s and Digipak.
Digipak Draft
This image shows one of our digipak drafts which we used when asking our
teacher for feedback on how to improve it. Our teacher said that The digipak
was good in the fact that all of the images inlcuded on it were linked to our
music video, and that it contained our main actor (playing the artist) in the
music video.
However he said that we could improve it if there were more images all over
the digipak, and more close up images of the artists face or facial expressions.
Digipak Final
This image shows a photo of our final digipak.
You can clearly see that we have used a lot more
images to create this digipak. There is a lot more
going on, especially on the front cover. This
means that it will grasp the attention of our
audience better, when they see it in stores or
online.
Magazine Advert drafts
This image shows one of our magazine advert
drafts that we asked feedback for from our
teacher. Our teacher said that the draft was
good already, showing not one, but both of the
actors featured in the music video clearly. He
also said that it was good that we had stuck to
our black and white theme, which runs
throughout the production of our music video,
digipak and magazine adverts.
However he said that the advert could do with
some more advertising of the record label and
to show where the audience can purchase the
album from.
Magazine Advert final
This image shows our final magazine advert which
I made. You can clearly see, much like the digipak,
that we have overlayed more images that are all
linked to the reduction of our music video. We
believe and our teacher said that this final was
much better than any of our other drafts, looking
more professional and eye-capturing. We also
extended the bottom of our magazine advert,
adding more advertising that will benefit the
artist when it is released.

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Evaluation 3

  • 1. Teacher Feedback for Mag ad’s and Digipak.
  • 2. Digipak Draft This image shows one of our digipak drafts which we used when asking our teacher for feedback on how to improve it. Our teacher said that The digipak was good in the fact that all of the images inlcuded on it were linked to our music video, and that it contained our main actor (playing the artist) in the music video. However he said that we could improve it if there were more images all over the digipak, and more close up images of the artists face or facial expressions.
  • 3. Digipak Final This image shows a photo of our final digipak. You can clearly see that we have used a lot more images to create this digipak. There is a lot more going on, especially on the front cover. This means that it will grasp the attention of our audience better, when they see it in stores or online.
  • 4. Magazine Advert drafts This image shows one of our magazine advert drafts that we asked feedback for from our teacher. Our teacher said that the draft was good already, showing not one, but both of the actors featured in the music video clearly. He also said that it was good that we had stuck to our black and white theme, which runs throughout the production of our music video, digipak and magazine adverts. However he said that the advert could do with some more advertising of the record label and to show where the audience can purchase the album from.
  • 5. Magazine Advert final This image shows our final magazine advert which I made. You can clearly see, much like the digipak, that we have overlayed more images that are all linked to the reduction of our music video. We believe and our teacher said that this final was much better than any of our other drafts, looking more professional and eye-capturing. We also extended the bottom of our magazine advert, adding more advertising that will benefit the artist when it is released.