This document provides feedback from a teacher to a student, Aaron Cork, on a pre-production tasks assignment. The teacher notes that Aaron was missing several key pre-production documents and materials in his initial submission. Aaron has now uploaded all of the missing work to his blog, including a script, storyboards, shot lists, floor plans, location photos, costumes, props, actor information, equipment lists, and a production schedule. The teacher acknowledges that Aaron's work now varies from basic to well-thought-out overall and merits a proficient level, raising his mark from 3/20 initially to 12/20 after completing all tasks.

1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Aaron Cork
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script No Yes
5. Drafts Some
6. Storyboard No Yes
7. Shot list No Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan No Yes
9. Locations No Yes
10.Costumes No Yes
11.Props No Yes
12.Actors No Some
13.Equipment No Yes
14.Production schedule No Yes
Teachers comments
1. Your film opening analysis is mixed from very detailed to brief (Sexy
Beast), all could do with the same detail. From Sexy Beast and Shank is
there anything you will take as inspiration for your film? No changes have
been made
2. Good prezi on your chosen genre with blog post of conventions.
3. Good prezi on your target audience well done.
4. No work uploaded Script now added, you could add stage directions to
show what you need your actors to do.
5. Some evidence of drafting from initial ideas mind map
6. No work uploaded Storyboards now added. They show your narrative
well however need camera shots and dialogue added to them.
7. No work uploaded A detailed shot list, well done.
8. No work uploaded Good floor plan layout, you need to add where the
camera will be placed in order to get your shots.
9. No work uploaded Location choices now added, good addition of images,
you could add a sentence to explain which scenes the photos are for.
10.No work uploaded Costume choices explained well, good addition of
images.
11.No work uploaded Props now added with good addition of images.
12.No work uploaded Names of actors have been added in with costume
choices, but no reasons for choosing them or images of them added.
13.No work uploaded Equipment now added, good use of powerpoint and
addition of images.
14.No work uploaded Production schedule now uploaded. Production
sections broken down well, you could break down the editing process to
show what scenes will be edited when.

2. Where is all your work Aaron? This is a barely a pass at the moment. Please
upload all work.
All work has been uploaded to blogger. Task vary from basic to very well
thought through. Overall, proficient, level 3.
Mark out of 20: 3
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14
Student action plan for improvement:
What I have added: All work if completed and now on my blog
 Scripts
 Storyboard
 Shot list
 Floor plan
 Location shots
 Costumes
 Props
 Actors
 Equipment
 Pre - production schedule
Final mark out of 20:12 Date:15/03/15