The audience feedback on the rough cut noted that the actor's singing was out of sync at times, especially during performance shots in the house, and some of the filming appeared shaky. While the progression of the story was clear, the ending was unclear. To improve, the audience suggested using different types of transitions between clips and obtaining additional footage to avoid repeated clips, which would help the piece appear more professional if the audio and video were better synced throughout.

1. Audience Feedback – Rough Cut 2

2. What didn’t you like about our rough cut?
In the video you portrayed a nice relationship between characters with nice vocals
which fit well with the story.
What do you think was good about our rough cut?
The actor’s singing was a bit out of sync in some of the video, particularly the performance
shots in the house and a bit of the filming was a little shaky in places.
Did you understand the narrative?
The progression of the story for the ages was clear, however the ending is not clear.

3. Maybe play around with different types of transitions between clips and get some
different footage so clips aren't repeated.
If it was all in sync I think it would look more professional compared with other
music videos in the industry.
Did our piece look professional?
What do you think we should improve?