The document discusses using peer feedback to review and improve a coursework project. The authors used various feedback methods, including face-to-face reviews, video reviews on social media platforms like YouTube, and questionnaires. Based on the feedback received, they made changes like refilming a character's part and replacing the black background in the opening video sequence. A questionnaire of 20 people provided generally positive feedback on the title sequence, target age range, magazine, and DVD cover representations.

2. Feedback
After finalising the first draft of our coursework we needed
feedback for us to see whether we needed to make changes to our
work. The audience feedback would allow us to review our work to
reveal how well we have kept to our brief. We decided to use
different methods of peer review to get a thorough review of our
project. The methods of feedback that we used include:
• Face to face
• Video Reviews
• Social Networking
• YouTube
• Questionnaires

3. Reviews
Hannah Dennis Jack Castledine
Q) What did you like about our project? Q) What did you like about our project?
A) It was different to other programmes of A) The way that the title sequence was shot
the same genre, rather than go for the was really innovative and suited the
obvious option of choosing one from target audience perfectly. The DVD cover
every “clique”, it was much more subtle. and magazine looked exactly like you
The sequence was funny, and the would get for a show like this, you
magazine and DVD complemented your followed media conventions closely to
video excellently. get a good result.
Q) What would you change in our project? Q) What would you change in our project?
A) If I had to change one thing it would be to A) I think the black background on the first
perhaps re-film Amy’s part as the camera shot of the film with “Winstanley Road “
is a little shaky and it doesn’t show her doesn't really fit. I would also consider
character off enough. The DVD and filming Amy’s part again, I think its too
magazine were great. weak.

4. Questionnaire
We decided that an effective way of having our project reviewed
would be to release a questionnaire on our project. We have
asked six questions that we felt were relevant about our project.
Using a sample of 20 people in our college to watch our clip and
look at our magazine and DVD covers. Their answer will then be
recorded as part of the data. The questions bring up notable
issues that we need to address within our project before we
complete our final drafts. They were constructed as a result of
Hannah and Jack’s reviews.

5. Does the title sequence make
you want to watch the series?
We thought the most important thing
about our title sequence had to be that it
looked appealing.
This simple yes or no question was asked
to make sure we had made our sequence
interesting enough that people would
want us to make an episode of it.
As you can see out of our 20 audience
members, just two said they didn’t want
to watch the series.
Yes
No

6. What age range do think this
programme is most suited for?
0 to 3
Another important issue we
4 to 8 needed to address was our target
9 to 12 audience. We needed to be sure
12 to 15 that we had matched our target
audience set out when we were
15 to 18 planning our project.
18 +
We therefore asked our survey of
20 people about the age range our
project suits most effectively.
Throughout the process of creating
our project we tried to keep in the
age range of 12-15 and thankfully
our survey revealed over 50% agree
that it suits this age group.

7. Does the black background at the
beginning of the video need replacing?
Yes An issue that we did have that needed
No to be addressed was that of the black
background at the start of our video.
We felt this stood out and didn’t fit in
with the rest of the video as it was
boring and we felt that the “Winstanley
Road” title needed something better.
Our survey agreed with us, with most
of them voting that it needed to be
changed.

8. If so, with what?
Shot of the school
Shot of the Lads
Shot of all the Charecters
The 14 people who voted that the
background needed changing were then
given three suggestions of a change.
We thought these three ideas would fit
into our piece easiest and let our survey
decide which one they thought was best.
The shot of the lads was clearly the most
popular option, so this is the one we
chose to film.

9. Do you think our magazine conforms
with our target audience of children
aged 12-15?
Yes It was vitally important that our
magazine was representative of
No our target age group.
We had to ensure that others
thought that we had conformed
with typical magazine features to
match it with our audience.
Only one person out of the twenty
thought that it didn’t suit the age
range so this was a good result for
us.

10. Overall how would you rate the DVD’s
representation of the series.
Very Good
Good
Ok
Poor
Very Poor
The final question we asked related
to our DVD cover.
We simply asked what score they
would give our DVD cover’s
representation of our program.
We got great feedback with no one
voting ‘poor’ or ‘very poor’, 50 %
voting ‘Good’ and 40% ‘Very Good’.
This gave us great confidence that
our DVD cover was at a good
standard.