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1. Audience Feedback
Camerawork
 Fabulous
 Great angles!
 Firstshot of doll inmirror wasamazing
 Maybe couldhave takenmore shots,a variety.Addmore meaning,the camerashotwiththe
doll wasgreat .
Sound
 The music fitsreallywellwithall the shotstaken
 Sounddidn’tfitthe picture ,musicin the backgroundwasscary
 Didn’tmatch the picture
 Reallygood
 Goo use of sound-uncomfortable loudsoundsatthe end
 Background/aftersoundsweregood
Editing
 Soundwas slightlyoff
 Good use of shots
 Reallygood
Mise-en-scene construction
 Mis enscene wasverynice , makeupwasgood
 Verygood, nice lighting
 Good
 Good costume ,fake bloodcouldhave beenmore realistic
Use of titles
 Titleswere great
 Reallynice fonts

2.  Titleswere good!
Genre
 Horror
 Horror, creepy
 Torture
 Horror? Psychological Horror?
Atmosphere
 Creepy
 Uncomfortable, butina goodway!
 Spooky
 Creepy
 Scary
Character
 Female, doll?
Areasfor improvement
 Perhaps lighting;makingitdarker?Shadows?