3. Research
The helps of my research were that I have found suitable ideas and ones
that I also liked.
The research helped me make my product by giving me the right ideas.
I have taken to much time doing my research and that made me fall
behind, but I have managed to make a magazine about what I wanted to do
and how I wanted to do it.
4. Planning
The strengths of my plan was that I have wrote down many ideas.
My planning has helped me by letting me note down my ideas so I could
look back when I am doing my final product.
5. Time Management
I didn’t manage my time well as I never do.
I didn’t complete my project on time, but I have completed it. I also don’t
think I would be able to improve my magazine as I have done everything I
wanted because I have taken extra time to do what I planned on my
magazine.
6. Technical Qualities
Similarities:
- There are main
characters on both
magazine covers.
- There are text on
both players.
- Both of them are
about the same
sport which is
football.
Differences:
- The original one
looks more
professional
whereas the one I
have made is less
professional
because the one on
the left has letters
over the player and
also behind, on the
one I have made
there are only one
word over lapping
the player.
7. Aesthetic Qualities
I think my work looked good, as it had
what I wanted to have in it.
I like the way I have set out the double
page spreads right page, where I have
talked about the two top players and
their stats.
The strengths of my product are that
the way I have set out the page is, the
way I have got the text and the pictures.
8. Audience Appeal
It appealed to my target audience because there was stuff in it I said there
will be, such as the right colours I mentioned in my plan and also the
interesting facts. It also met the right things I said in my research, for
example the age rating as I didn’t use any foul language or inappropriate
things. There is mainly content for the male gender as its about football
which is a sport mainly males are interested in.
10. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– Its colourful and will guaranteed to get the audience
you are looking for.
– The titles are bold and clear to read.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Needs more information for the audience to read
about football.
– More editing to make it more realistic.
11. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– Chantelle has done this
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
12. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
I agree as it is colourful and also has clear fonts and well visible.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
I do not agree with “More editing to make it more realistic”.
13. Peer Feedback Summary
I would give a bit more information about other stuff
related to the champions league. I would like to do
that because it is quite short and if I did a bit more
info then it could be a bit more interesting.
Editor's Notes
What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time?
What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences
Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product
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Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your magazines visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it?
Discuss the strengths and weaknesses
Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them
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How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience.
Refer to your findings from your questionnaire.
Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them
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What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?
