Introduction to Multilingual Retrieval Augmented Generation (RAG)
Evaluation question 7
1. Question 7
Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you
feel you have learned from the progression of it to
the full product?
Evaluation
2. Comparing preliminary task to latest
version
Looking at my preliminary task I find
my Rock magazine looks much
cleaner and professional than the
school magazine. Reasons for this are
the writing and title which look more
professional. The whole picture
appears in a clearer and organised
way.
At the beginning of the year I had no
idea how to insert simple images or
edit fonts. My rock magazine shows
that I have improved over the year.
3. Comparison
After looking at my preliminary contents
page I can see a huge difference. The
school magazine contents page
looks less organised and slightly messy.
the fonts appear in an unprofessional
way and are hard to read, whereas the
writing on the rock magazine contents
is very clear and easy to read.
I personally found the contents page
the most difficult part of the whole
magazine because I personally
underestimated
the difficulty of creating a professional
looking contents page.
4. Front Cover
Before After
The title is
not big
enough
and
appears
invisible
The title
is big
enough
and the
frame
puts it
in focus
and
creates
an eye
catcher
5. Front cover
The colour choice is wrong
As the main image is not in
focus and the writing is white
and therefore it is hard to
identify the writing on the
cover.
The barcode is missing
And the cover line looks better
On top of the page
I have learned
that colour
choice is the most
important factor
and a barcode
makes a
magazine
appear in a
professional way
6. Double page spread The title looks boring
As it does not have a specific colour
or form
Two columns
are usually
nicer on a
double page
spread,
however the
writing is not
perfect yet.
The white space does
not look nice
The
photograph
was the only
factor I was
happy with
from the
beginning
and didn’t
apply any
changes or
corrections.
7. Double page spread I changed the colour and writing of
The main title. I have learned that
red is always a
Great colour for titles.
The professional
photographs
Make the double page
spread look more
Interesting and exciting.
This sentence is darker
in order to provocate
The reader with
The statement.
I have learned
that a double
page spread
needs to
include
different types
and styles of
writings and
colours. A
double page
spread should
always include
as many
exciting
photographs
as possible.
9. Contents page
This was my first draft of a contents page. I personally believe that the
structure and choice of photographs is not bad, however the writing and
style is not perfect. The writing is too big and the style of it looks too
simple and unprofessional. The title contents seems to disappear behind
the black box.
The contents page looks too wild and messy.
10. Contents page
This is a complete different example of a
contents page. I learned to use a different
structure by looking at other examples of
contents pages. I inserted a small F on the top
left and bottom right which relates to my title
Flammable. The box with the page number inside
of the photograph makes the contents look
professional. The two sections on the bottom
create a structured effect. It was an idea of mine
to insert official tour dates of the magazine star
on the bottom right. I continued using my usual
style and colour of the Rock genre.
11. Summary
From the examples shown I have learned how to create a
professional looking contents page, double page spread and
front cover.
I have learned how to use different editing programmes and their
facilities.
I have learned how to take professional looking photographs
I have learned that creating a magazine is very time-consuming
and needs a big time investment.
12. Photographs
I have learned that a good
photograph needs good
lighting, an extraordinary make
up and a very good editing
program.
