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Year 7 Poetry
Metaphors
Inventing
Extending
Think of an animal…..
My teacher is an eagle
My teacher is an eagle swooping around the
room, hovering over his students, diving down
on innocent prey and demolishing them with
the terrible grip of his talons.
My teacher is an eagle
swooping
around the room,
hovering
over his students,
d
i
v
i
n
g
down
on innocent prey
demolishing them
with the terrible grip
of his talons.
The Writer
The writer is a magpie
As he dips into other lives,
Selecting bright baubles.
What other metaphors might we suggest for the writer?
Analysis
Looking at the poem written as an
example, explain the writer uses
extended metaphor and structure.
My teacher is an eagle
swooping
around the room,
hovering
over his students,
d
i
v
i
n
g
down
on innocent prey
demolishing them
with the terrible grip
of his talons.
Analysis
Looking at the poem written as an example, explain how the writer uses
extended metaphor and structure.
Use of Extended Metaphor Choices of Structure and Layout
Look at the image of the meercat.
• Make a list down the centre of
the page of the key things you
can see.
Now take each idea in turn an use
a little bit of technique (e.g.
alliteration or imagery) to begin
to develop each idea.
eyes
nose
ears
toes
fur
Activity 1
Now think of your language
choices.
• What verbs could you use to
describe the meercat?
• What adverbs could you use?
• Adjectives?
Activity 2
Analysis
Looking at the meerkat poem, explain the writer’s lexical choices and use of
language techniques.
Lexical choices Language techniques used
Poems of possibilities
Places (classroom, shed…)
Abstract nouns
Poems of possibilities
In the (name of place) of (abstract noun)...
For example:
In the library of secrets ...
The shelves whisper quietly
Concealing...
The City of Doom
In the city of doom –
The streets are awash with dead starfish
And the windows have wept tears of ice.
The shops are empty as silence.
The city of emptiness
In the city of emptiness –
The streets are silent as snow.
Houses are hollow as bones.
The cars glide by with no-one driving them.
The train station is waiting for a train that will never arrive.
The traffic lights flicker for no-one.
In the box of impossibilities…
ACTIVITY – in groups take six ideas and start to write a
poem.
You might like to think about how you might link ideas and
the order of things, maybe starting with the obvious and
moving on to the most crazy idea.

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Y7 Writing Poetry

  • 3. My teacher is an eagle
  • 4. My teacher is an eagle swooping around the room, hovering over his students, diving down on innocent prey and demolishing them with the terrible grip of his talons.
  • 5. My teacher is an eagle swooping around the room, hovering over his students, d i v i n g down on innocent prey demolishing them with the terrible grip of his talons.
  • 6. The Writer The writer is a magpie As he dips into other lives, Selecting bright baubles. What other metaphors might we suggest for the writer?
  • 7. Analysis Looking at the poem written as an example, explain the writer uses extended metaphor and structure. My teacher is an eagle swooping around the room, hovering over his students, d i v i n g down on innocent prey demolishing them with the terrible grip of his talons.
  • 8. Analysis Looking at the poem written as an example, explain how the writer uses extended metaphor and structure. Use of Extended Metaphor Choices of Structure and Layout
  • 9.
  • 10. Look at the image of the meercat. • Make a list down the centre of the page of the key things you can see. Now take each idea in turn an use a little bit of technique (e.g. alliteration or imagery) to begin to develop each idea. eyes nose ears toes fur Activity 1
  • 11. Now think of your language choices. • What verbs could you use to describe the meercat? • What adverbs could you use? • Adjectives? Activity 2
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  • 16. Analysis Looking at the meerkat poem, explain the writer’s lexical choices and use of language techniques. Lexical choices Language techniques used
  • 17. Poems of possibilities Places (classroom, shed…) Abstract nouns
  • 18. Poems of possibilities In the (name of place) of (abstract noun)... For example: In the library of secrets ... The shelves whisper quietly Concealing...
  • 19. The City of Doom In the city of doom – The streets are awash with dead starfish And the windows have wept tears of ice. The shops are empty as silence.
  • 20. The city of emptiness In the city of emptiness – The streets are silent as snow. Houses are hollow as bones. The cars glide by with no-one driving them. The train station is waiting for a train that will never arrive. The traffic lights flicker for no-one.
  • 21. In the box of impossibilities… ACTIVITY – in groups take six ideas and start to write a poem. You might like to think about how you might link ideas and the order of things, maybe starting with the obvious and moving on to the most crazy idea.

Editor's Notes

  1. P 73 – poetry Y5 pupils will have come up knowing lots about similes but the challenge will be to take them on to metaphors. “My teacher is like an eagle” becomes “my teacher IS an eagle”.
  2. How could we extend this metaphor? Brainstorm ‘eagle’ for ideas (link back to this morning’s approaches)
  3. Words that show the extended metaphor in a different colour Think about the structure of the poem – which words do you want to emphasise?
  4. Key message: In order to get a good poem, we need to think about what we’re going to focus in on.
  5. Model the first bit
  6. Model the first bit
  7. In pairs: One brainstorms ‘place’ nouns, the other brainstorms abstract nouns. Looking for unexpected combinations!
  8. In pairs: One brainstorms ‘place’ nouns, the other brainstorms abstract nouns. Looking for unexpected combinations!
  9. Refer to Kit Wright’s in my magic box poem