The power of
words in
sentences
can create
peace or war,
harmony or
discord,
separation or
reconciliation.
Sentences need to have. . . .
•A subject
•A verb
•And they need to make sense (be an independent
clause)
A phrase is a group of words
that lacks a subject, a verb,
or both. Two phrases that
we use are--
•Prepositional phrase


•Sentence: They kept dialing
Rose’s phone number with no
success.
•Infinitive phrase (to + verb)
•Sentence: Matilda always wanted
to run a marathon
Split Infinitives
Fix the split infinitives in the
  following:
1. The coach told her to quickly run five
   laps around the track.
2. It is important to softly and silently
   step into the baby’s room.
3. Jonathan Edwards preached with
   such strong conviction to positively,
   absolutely, unequivocally keep
   sinners from hell.
Sometimes sentences are not
really a sentence, but a
fragment.

Sometimes a sentence is
missing its subject; sometimes
a sentence is missing its verb.
Sometimes our sentences aren’t
                   sentences at all. They are run-on
                   sentences or what they call, a
                   “comma splice.”
For example:
Joey ran to the store he ate a hamburger on his way
home. (run-on)

Joey ran to the store, he ate a hamburger on his way
home. (comma splice)

Joey ran to the store. He ate a hamburger on his way
home. (correct)
Now it’s your turn. How might you
 correct these fragments or run-
 on/comma splice sentences?
1. Rosa talks about her relationship
   with her parents, she grew up
   following her family’s values.
2.Ralph always wanted to be a stand-
  up comic he liked to make people
  laugh.
3.The family set out for a new
  country. In which they could practice
  their culture and religion.
A modifier that is not grammatically linked to
  the noun or phrase it is intended to
  describe is said to be dangling.
 Walking into the house, the telephone
 rang.
 (The sentence says the
 telephone was walking.)
Delighted with the team’s victory, the
parade route was decorated by fans.


(The sentence says the parade route
was delighted.)
Method 1: Keep the modifier, but make the
 subject of the independent clause the
 person or thing modified.
1.Walking into the house, we heard the
  telephone.
2.Delighted with the team’s victory, the fans
  decorated the parade route.
More on Dangle
Method 2: Change the modifier
 phrase into a clause with its
 own subject and verb.
1.While we were walking into
 the house, the telephone
 rang.
2.Because the fans were
 delighted with the team’s
Remember….


The sentence is very powerful: choose your
words carefully, and use them to your
advantage.

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  • 2.
    The power of wordsin sentences can create peace or war, harmony or discord, separation or reconciliation.
  • 3.
    Sentences need tohave. . . . •A subject •A verb •And they need to make sense (be an independent clause)
  • 4.
    A phrase isa group of words that lacks a subject, a verb, or both. Two phrases that we use are-- •Prepositional phrase •Sentence: They kept dialing Rose’s phone number with no success. •Infinitive phrase (to + verb) •Sentence: Matilda always wanted to run a marathon
  • 5.
  • 6.
    Fix the splitinfinitives in the following: 1. The coach told her to quickly run five laps around the track. 2. It is important to softly and silently step into the baby’s room. 3. Jonathan Edwards preached with such strong conviction to positively, absolutely, unequivocally keep sinners from hell.
  • 7.
    Sometimes sentences arenot really a sentence, but a fragment. Sometimes a sentence is missing its subject; sometimes a sentence is missing its verb.
  • 8.
    Sometimes our sentencesaren’t sentences at all. They are run-on sentences or what they call, a “comma splice.” For example: Joey ran to the store he ate a hamburger on his way home. (run-on) Joey ran to the store, he ate a hamburger on his way home. (comma splice) Joey ran to the store. He ate a hamburger on his way home. (correct)
  • 9.
    Now it’s yourturn. How might you correct these fragments or run- on/comma splice sentences? 1. Rosa talks about her relationship with her parents, she grew up following her family’s values. 2.Ralph always wanted to be a stand- up comic he liked to make people laugh. 3.The family set out for a new country. In which they could practice their culture and religion.
  • 10.
    A modifier thatis not grammatically linked to the noun or phrase it is intended to describe is said to be dangling. Walking into the house, the telephone rang. (The sentence says the telephone was walking.)
  • 11.
    Delighted with theteam’s victory, the parade route was decorated by fans. (The sentence says the parade route was delighted.)
  • 12.
    Method 1: Keepthe modifier, but make the subject of the independent clause the person or thing modified. 1.Walking into the house, we heard the telephone. 2.Delighted with the team’s victory, the fans decorated the parade route.
  • 13.
    More on Dangle Method2: Change the modifier phrase into a clause with its own subject and verb. 1.While we were walking into the house, the telephone rang. 2.Because the fans were delighted with the team’s
  • 14.
    Remember…. The sentence isvery powerful: choose your words carefully, and use them to your advantage.