Sentences need. . . .
                          •A subject
                          •A verb
                          •And they need to make sense
                          (be an independent clause)




“When writing, silent thoughts produce powerful
sentences.”
A phrase is a group of words
that lacks a subject, a verb,
or both. Two phrases that
we use are—
Prepositional phrase
•Sentence: They kept dialing
Rose’s phone number with no
success.
Infinitive phrase (to + verb)
•Sentence: Matilda always wanted
to run a marathon
• An infinitive phrase is
the word “to” + a verb—
to run, to jump, to kiss.
•What we call a “split
infinitive is when a word
or phrase comes
between the word “to”
and the verb.
•We want to sincerely
welcome you to class.
    (A clumsy infinitive—
    to welcome.)
Fix the split infinitives in the following:
1. The coach told her to quickly run five laps
   around the track.
2. It is important to softly and silently step
   into the baby’s room.
3. Jonathan Edwards preached with such
   strong conviction to positively, absolutely,
   unequivocally keep sinners from hell.
Sometimes sentences are not
really a sentence, but a
fragment.

Sometimes a sentence is lacks
the subject or verb.

Sometimes a sentence lacks
both a subject and verb.
Sometimes sentences are run-on
                     sentences or what is called, a
                     “comma splice.”

For example:
Joey ran to the store he ate a hamburger on his way home.
(run-on)

Joey ran to the store, he ate a hamburger on his way home.
(comma splice)

Joey ran to the store. He ate a hamburger on his way home.
(correct)
Now it’s your turn. How might you correct
  these fragments or run-on/comma splice
  sentences?
1. Rosa talks about her relationship with her
   parents, she grew up following her family’s
   values.
2. Ralph always wanted to be a stand-up
   comic he liked to make people laugh.
3. The family set out for a new country. In
   which they could practice their culture and
   religion.
A modifier that is not
  grammatically linked to the
  noun or phrase it is
  intended to describe is said
  to be dangling.
  Walking into the house, the
  telephone rang.
  (The sentence says the
   telephone was walking.)
Delighted with the team’s victory, the parade route
was decorated by fans.
(The sentence says the parade route was
delighted.)
Method 1: Keep the modifier, but make the
 subject of the independent clause the
 person or thing modified.
1.Walking into the house, we heard the
  telephone.
2.Delighted with the team’s victory, the fans
  decorated the parade route.
More on Dangle
Method 2: Change the
 modifier phrase into a
 clause with its own subject
 and verb.
1. While we were walking into
   the house, the telephone
   rang.
2. Because the fans were
   delighted with the team’s
   victory, they decorated the
   parade route.
Remember….
The sentence is very
powerful: choose
your words
carefully, and use
them to your
advantage.

The Power of Sentences

  • 2.
    Sentences need. .. . •A subject •A verb •And they need to make sense (be an independent clause) “When writing, silent thoughts produce powerful sentences.”
  • 3.
    A phrase isa group of words that lacks a subject, a verb, or both. Two phrases that we use are— Prepositional phrase •Sentence: They kept dialing Rose’s phone number with no success. Infinitive phrase (to + verb) •Sentence: Matilda always wanted to run a marathon
  • 4.
    • An infinitivephrase is the word “to” + a verb— to run, to jump, to kiss. •What we call a “split infinitive is when a word or phrase comes between the word “to” and the verb. •We want to sincerely welcome you to class. (A clumsy infinitive— to welcome.)
  • 5.
    Fix the splitinfinitives in the following: 1. The coach told her to quickly run five laps around the track. 2. It is important to softly and silently step into the baby’s room. 3. Jonathan Edwards preached with such strong conviction to positively, absolutely, unequivocally keep sinners from hell.
  • 6.
    Sometimes sentences arenot really a sentence, but a fragment. Sometimes a sentence is lacks the subject or verb. Sometimes a sentence lacks both a subject and verb.
  • 7.
    Sometimes sentences arerun-on sentences or what is called, a “comma splice.” For example: Joey ran to the store he ate a hamburger on his way home. (run-on) Joey ran to the store, he ate a hamburger on his way home. (comma splice) Joey ran to the store. He ate a hamburger on his way home. (correct)
  • 8.
    Now it’s yourturn. How might you correct these fragments or run-on/comma splice sentences? 1. Rosa talks about her relationship with her parents, she grew up following her family’s values. 2. Ralph always wanted to be a stand-up comic he liked to make people laugh. 3. The family set out for a new country. In which they could practice their culture and religion.
  • 9.
    A modifier thatis not grammatically linked to the noun or phrase it is intended to describe is said to be dangling. Walking into the house, the telephone rang. (The sentence says the telephone was walking.)
  • 10.
    Delighted with theteam’s victory, the parade route was decorated by fans. (The sentence says the parade route was delighted.)
  • 11.
    Method 1: Keepthe modifier, but make the subject of the independent clause the person or thing modified. 1.Walking into the house, we heard the telephone. 2.Delighted with the team’s victory, the fans decorated the parade route.
  • 12.
    More on Dangle Method2: Change the modifier phrase into a clause with its own subject and verb. 1. While we were walking into the house, the telephone rang. 2. Because the fans were delighted with the team’s victory, they decorated the parade route.
  • 13.
    Remember…. The sentence isvery powerful: choose your words carefully, and use them to your advantage.