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Proofreading 2.0 How technology can help our students become better writers Presented by:							        Website:  Bryan M. Berretta				http://www.collaterallearning.com
What are we trying to do?    Make our students more aware of the stylistic and structural format of their writing by helping them to be better proofreaders. The “Who, Why, What and Where”….
Students know how to write a paper But can they write well? Proofreading is a “stage” in the writing process, not a “step.” Basic Assumptions
Prewriting Brainstorm, idea mapping, developing thesis Research Supporting the argument- building rhetoric Drafting Pumping out the first draft Revising Cleaning it up. Editing/Proofreading Perfecting it. Stages in writing a paper
Prewriting
Research
Drafting
Revising
Editing/ Proofing
But can they write well? We’ve taught them how to write…
How does Technology enhance Proofreading?
Technology tecnh logia
Technology tecnh logia Skill, Craft, Art
Technology tecnh logia Talk, Speech, Word
Technology… redefined tecnh logia Technology is the tools you need to do your skill/craft/art to it’s absolute best.
Students must see the experience the writing differently How do we make proofreading successful?
Give yourself some distance between writing and proofreading. Get a friend to hear you read your paper and read it back to you. Don’t rely on spell check alone. Try experiencing your paper differently. What do students need to do?
See writing differently
Talking Clipboard Audacity Spokentext.net Hearing it differently
May not be the most technologically advanced method… but it works! Checklists – Grade your own work.
If proofreading is a stage just like research, we need time to do it. Don’t just wait until the last minute! Give yourself time…
Resources http://www.collaterallearning.com (click on Presentations)
The Big 6 Approach 1. Task Definition 1.1 Define the information problem 1.2 Identify information needed 2. Information Seeking Strategies 2.1 Determine all possible sources 2.2 Select the best sources 3. Location and Access 3.1 Locate sources (intellectually and physically) 3.2 Find information within sources 4. Use of Information 4.1 Engage (e.g., read, hear, view, touch) 4.2 Extract relevant information 5. Synthesis 5.1 Organize from multiple sources 5.2 Present the information 6. Evaluation 6.1 Judge the product (effectiveness) 6.2 Judge the process (efficiency)

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Proofreading 2.0

  • 1.
  • 2. Proofreading 2.0 How technology can help our students become better writers Presented by: Website: Bryan M. Berretta http://www.collaterallearning.com
  • 3. What are we trying to do? Make our students more aware of the stylistic and structural format of their writing by helping them to be better proofreaders. The “Who, Why, What and Where”….
  • 4. Students know how to write a paper But can they write well? Proofreading is a “stage” in the writing process, not a “step.” Basic Assumptions
  • 5. Prewriting Brainstorm, idea mapping, developing thesis Research Supporting the argument- building rhetoric Drafting Pumping out the first draft Revising Cleaning it up. Editing/Proofreading Perfecting it. Stages in writing a paper
  • 11. But can they write well? We’ve taught them how to write…
  • 12. How does Technology enhance Proofreading?
  • 14. Technology tecnh logia Skill, Craft, Art
  • 15. Technology tecnh logia Talk, Speech, Word
  • 16. Technology… redefined tecnh logia Technology is the tools you need to do your skill/craft/art to it’s absolute best.
  • 17. Students must see the experience the writing differently How do we make proofreading successful?
  • 18. Give yourself some distance between writing and proofreading. Get a friend to hear you read your paper and read it back to you. Don’t rely on spell check alone. Try experiencing your paper differently. What do students need to do?
  • 20. Talking Clipboard Audacity Spokentext.net Hearing it differently
  • 21. May not be the most technologically advanced method… but it works! Checklists – Grade your own work.
  • 22. If proofreading is a stage just like research, we need time to do it. Don’t just wait until the last minute! Give yourself time…
  • 24. The Big 6 Approach 1. Task Definition 1.1 Define the information problem 1.2 Identify information needed 2. Information Seeking Strategies 2.1 Determine all possible sources 2.2 Select the best sources 3. Location and Access 3.1 Locate sources (intellectually and physically) 3.2 Find information within sources 4. Use of Information 4.1 Engage (e.g., read, hear, view, touch) 4.2 Extract relevant information 5. Synthesis 5.1 Organize from multiple sources 5.2 Present the information 6. Evaluation 6.1 Judge the product (effectiveness) 6.2 Judge the process (efficiency)