The document provides peer review guidelines for revising an essay. It lists 7 areas of focus for revision: 1) word choice and style, 2) visualization, 3) describing two forms of the message's medium, 4) avoiding cliches, 5) including a moment of tension, 6) properly introducing quotes, and 7) meeting formatting requirements. Reviewers are instructed to provide specific examples and suggestions for improvement in each area and submit their review as a typed response.