Preparing For
 The Unit 3&4
English Exam -
17
It’s getting to the
serious end of things...
Persuasive words /
        phrases

• No labels
• Just persuasive words and phrases
Gillard’s attack on
      Abbott
1
          Analyse Word / Phrase
                               2•
•       When [name of
        person]
                                    says....[insert word or phrase]...

                                •   uses the word....
•       When the author
                                •   Uses the phrase....[insert word or
•       When speaker                phrase]...

•       When the writer         •   exclaims....[insert word or
                                    phrase]...

                                •   describes... as....[insert word or

    •   this suggests to   3        phrase]...
        us...                   •    attacks...as....[insert word or
                                    phrase]...
    •   makes us feel...
    •   creates the
        association for
        us...                   4 •   Consequently...
    •   makes us visualise /
        imagine /                 •   Because of this...
        picture....
                                  •   We then think....
Language Analysis
Skills vs.
Knowledge
Language Analysis


• 10-15 minutes of practice every 1-3 days
  will make more impact than ‘cramming’ in
  SWOT Vac.
Task & Background
Task & Background
Headlines you’re
 unlikely to see
The Contention
The Tone


• Emotive?
• Logical?
Gillard’s attack on
      Abbott
Purpose of tone


• Through the use of...the author establishes
  a.....and....tone that seeks to position the
  reader to feel that....
What’s the link?
2010: “students who attempted to work laboriously
through every sentence found the task difficult.
Students needed to choose which parts of the material
they would use to explore the way in which language was
being used.”
2010: “Some responses were just simple summaries or
lists of the techniques used, with little development.
These pieces did not score well as they did not fulfil the
task.”
2011: In stronger responses, strategic selection, together
with well-developed précis skills, allowed students to
demonstrate their language analysis skills.
Select
Don’t Label
•   Appealing to the readers sense of social justice, Lee reminds the audience
    why biological diversity is ‘so important’ in protecting the living standards of
    the ‘poor’. Highlighting how reduced genetic variation and increased
    biological similarity within ecosystems will impinge upon ‘food security’,
    ‘nutrition’ and the health of the ‘rural poor’ in exacerbating ‘extreme
    poverty’, Lee asserts that it is our humanitarian duty to ensure that such
    injustice is not inflected upon our fellow human beings. Metaphorically
    presenting ‘us’ Westerners as the ‘powerful economic giant’ and callous
    ‘affluent hunters’ ‘subordinating’ the interests of the poor to pursue personal
    wealth and ravish the environment, Lee urges us to ‘hunt less, gather less
    and preserve more before it is too late’, effectively summarizing the crux of
    his argument into a useful repetition of metaphor. By evoking imagery in the
    reader with ‘us’ – the affluent, greedy giant, insatiably destroying habitats
    and marginalising the livelihood of the third world, the reader’s sense of
    justice and righteousness is inflamed to urge compliance to Lee’s contention.
Visual

• Our focus is captured by the visual when /
  at...
• Draws attention to the idea...
• Re-inforces the point that...
• Supports the contention / argument that...
2010 Picture
How To Study


•   Studying for Language Analysis needs to be about more
    than just writing whole practice pieces and memorising
    the names of techniques
Language Analysis
• Practice reading and thinking
• Just focus on single words and phrases
• Just focus on visual
• Just focus on tone (emotive vs. logical)
• Just focus on selecting/planning a response
• Practice a whole response only when
  you’ve worked on different individual skills
  2-3 times
Effective study

• Have a study goal per week
• Have a study goal per study session
• Discuss different options for achieving
  these goals
Thank you...

Language Analysis 2012

  • 1.
    Preparing For TheUnit 3&4 English Exam -
  • 2.
  • 3.
    It’s getting tothe serious end of things...
  • 4.
    Persuasive words / phrases • No labels • Just persuasive words and phrases
  • 5.
  • 6.
    1 Analyse Word / Phrase 2• • When [name of person] says....[insert word or phrase]... • uses the word.... • When the author • Uses the phrase....[insert word or • When speaker phrase]... • When the writer • exclaims....[insert word or phrase]... • describes... as....[insert word or • this suggests to 3 phrase]... us... • attacks...as....[insert word or phrase]... • makes us feel... • creates the association for us... 4 • Consequently... • makes us visualise / imagine / • Because of this... picture.... • We then think....
  • 7.
  • 9.
  • 10.
    Language Analysis • 10-15minutes of practice every 1-3 days will make more impact than ‘cramming’ in SWOT Vac.
  • 11.
  • 12.
  • 13.
  • 14.
  • 15.
  • 16.
  • 17.
    Purpose of tone •Through the use of...the author establishes a.....and....tone that seeks to position the reader to feel that....
  • 18.
    What’s the link? 2010:“students who attempted to work laboriously through every sentence found the task difficult. Students needed to choose which parts of the material they would use to explore the way in which language was being used.” 2010: “Some responses were just simple summaries or lists of the techniques used, with little development. These pieces did not score well as they did not fulfil the task.” 2011: In stronger responses, strategic selection, together with well-developed précis skills, allowed students to demonstrate their language analysis skills.
  • 19.
  • 20.
    Don’t Label • Appealing to the readers sense of social justice, Lee reminds the audience why biological diversity is ‘so important’ in protecting the living standards of the ‘poor’. Highlighting how reduced genetic variation and increased biological similarity within ecosystems will impinge upon ‘food security’, ‘nutrition’ and the health of the ‘rural poor’ in exacerbating ‘extreme poverty’, Lee asserts that it is our humanitarian duty to ensure that such injustice is not inflected upon our fellow human beings. Metaphorically presenting ‘us’ Westerners as the ‘powerful economic giant’ and callous ‘affluent hunters’ ‘subordinating’ the interests of the poor to pursue personal wealth and ravish the environment, Lee urges us to ‘hunt less, gather less and preserve more before it is too late’, effectively summarizing the crux of his argument into a useful repetition of metaphor. By evoking imagery in the reader with ‘us’ – the affluent, greedy giant, insatiably destroying habitats and marginalising the livelihood of the third world, the reader’s sense of justice and righteousness is inflamed to urge compliance to Lee’s contention.
  • 21.
    Visual • Our focusis captured by the visual when / at... • Draws attention to the idea... • Re-inforces the point that... • Supports the contention / argument that...
  • 22.
  • 25.
    How To Study • Studying for Language Analysis needs to be about more than just writing whole practice pieces and memorising the names of techniques
  • 26.
    Language Analysis • Practicereading and thinking • Just focus on single words and phrases • Just focus on visual • Just focus on tone (emotive vs. logical) • Just focus on selecting/planning a response • Practice a whole response only when you’ve worked on different individual skills 2-3 times
  • 27.
    Effective study • Havea study goal per week • Have a study goal per study session • Discuss different options for achieving these goals
  • 28.