The document provides recommendations to improve the design of a magazine mock up, including brightening a dark cover image, reducing the size of an image on the contents page and adding more text, and rearranging text and quotes on a double page spread to make it look more full.

1. Magazine mock up designs
analysis

2. Front cover
Take out this and release it with
an image of an CD
Move the date and price
down to be onto of the
barcode
Take this text out and replace
with ‘Everything you need to
know for this years Leeds Fest’
Change the font
style for these two
sections of text as
well as moving each
line of text closer
together
Adjust the levels of the image
making the image brighter as
section of the image are too
dark

3. Contents Page
Make this image slightly
smaller
Add more text as well
as making the font
size smaller

4. Double Page Spread
Move this to a different section in
the text as well as possibly changing
the quote
Change the page
number to 16 as
double page spreads
are conventionally on
an even number
Rearrange the text as well
as adding more to the
interview so that the page
will look more full