The document discusses revising a double page magazine layout to improve readability. The original landscape image spread text across pages in a messy way. The image was changed to a portrait orientation fitting on one page, with room to move a quote over the image for clarity. On the other page, a white background and larger title in blue, matching the drop cap, makes the writing easier to read while allowing space for an introduction and title. Minor grammatical errors were also corrected after proofreading.