Let students write!

   让学生写
1. Writing Journals
     写日记
2. The Planning process

    在写作前计划
3. Meaningful Writing

   有意义的写作
1. Writing Journals
     写日记
What does your writing program look like?




Mechanics of Writing         Formula Writing
Character writing on grids   Copy sentences
Radicals / Stroke order      Prepared writing tasks
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Let the students write!
 Mechanics of Writing         Formula Writing
 Character writing on grids   Copy sentences
 Radicals / Stroke order      Prepared writing tasks



My thinking 我的想法
                                My opinions 我的意见




  My feelings 我的感情
                               My suggestions 我的建议
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What does your writing program look like?
                      the fence
 Remembering                 Modelled Writing          Writing for a Purpose
  Characters                (Teacher generated model   (Student generated writing)
 (Saturday session)                  writing)




                                                       I feel that....

                                                       I enjoy....

                                                        I wish....

                                                        I hope....

                                                        My opinion is....
Purpose of writing is to.....

                                                   e




 communicatet
Opinions   Ideas   Suggestions   Recommendations
                                      9
Do you encourage students to express themselves?
Formula Writing                      Express myself!




                              I hope there is a new series of Dr. Who.


                              I think Britain’s Got Talent is the greatest!


                               I especially like watching music videos,
                               because I want to learn to play the
                               guitar.

                                                          10
Expressing my
            opinion matters..
I think...

I feel...

I wish...

My opinion is...

I hope...
                            11
Why use a Chinese Journal?
               为什么写中文日记?
• Opinions and Ideas           • Provides Feedback
• S.T.P.V.O                    • Frequency of writing
• Express THEIR opinion, not     increases
  the teachers                 • Reflect on learning
• Natural writing that is      • Record of writing progress
  owned by students            • Breaks down fear of
• Learning of new vocabulary     writing / using correct
• Differentiation - Weaker       characters etc.,
  students can excel           • Emphasizes PROCESS of
                                 writing
                                                   12
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Chinese Journals



1. Three times a week, you will write an entry in
your 日记.You can use 英文 and 中文 to start with.

2. The Journal is where you will write your thoughts,
opinions, and likes/dislikes about anything.You may also
illustrate your journal.

3. Every Friday, I will collect your Journals and give you
feedback about your writing.
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Writing is a
 process, and
 students are
 permitted to
make mistakes!

写作是一个过
程,并允许学生
犯错误!
My Word Bank


• store new words
• expand vocabulary
• easy to refer to..
• customized to each
  individual student



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Allow students to add to the Word Wall


                           Word Bank 字银行
                                   -  ecomes a Reference for the class
                                    b

                                   -  xtends vocabulary beyond set
                                    e
                                   characters

                                   -  asier to retrieve vocabulary
                                    e




                                  Students keep their own 
                                  Word Wall in a Folder


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Learning Map
               20
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There’s a Celebrity in my Journal Week
  在周记里有名人(学生在他们的日记里写一个名人.)


  What does he look like?
 他是什么样子的?
 What do you like about him?
 关于他你喜欢他什么?
 What don’t you like about him?
 关于他你不喜欢他什么?
 What kind of person is he?
 他是什么样的人呢?
 What does he do best?
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 他(是)做什么最好?
Word Order 句子中的词序

    S.T. P.V.O
我
I   星期一             踢      足球
     Monday       kicked        football



         在学校   at school   23
Tenses   过去,现在和将来时态


• Past           我以前.......




• Present        我现在.......




• Future         我将去.......

                              24
Writing is a
 Process.


               我周末打算......




                             25
Experimenting
 and Mistakes
are central to
  the writing
   Process.




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2. Plan before writing
Teach the Writing Process
• Generate ideas     想一想
• Organize content    组织内容
• First draft        写第一稿
• Proofread        复习一下




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1. Generate ideas 产生想法
 You are a blogger for a website about what it’s like to be a
                     teenager in the UK

                                                  My interests
Friends                 Introduction
                        of self




                                                   Hopes for the
Difficulties                                       future

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1. Generate ideas
       You are on work experience in a Health Club
               and need to write a web page

                       List available         Benefits of
Day and time           classes                regular exercise
of classes




                                             Importance of
 Getting fit                                 keeping healthy

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                                                     30
1. Generate ideas
 You are writing to a Chinese e-pal about your Easter break.

Explain Easter          What did you
break                   do at home?             What you did
                                                with friends?




                                               Plans for the
A boring day?                                  weekend?


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STEP 1: Generate ideas in English
                                   想⼀一想

The type of house do you live in
                                               Events where you live
-house/flat?
                                               -Tourist attractions?
-like/dislike your house? Why?
                                               -What is there to do in summer? winter?
-compare your house with housing in China?
                                               -Festivals? / celebrations?
-how long lived there?




           Write a Blog about where you live.

 Describe the place you live                   Where you want to live in the future
 -what your city/town is like?                 -Type of area you would like to live in?
 -what is there for young people to do?        -What would be there for you?
 -what you like about it / dislike? Why?       -Why?

                                                                       32
STEP 2: Organize content (Chinese)
          组织内容




                               33
Mind Maps 创建一个心地图




                                 34
   http://www.mindmeister.com/
STEP 3:
Write a first draft
    写初稿



           35
STEP 4: Proofread and Edit 编辑你的写作




I learn best when I am given opportunities to reflect on my
       learning and are given advice on how to make 36
                      improvements.
    feedback 反馈                            	
  	
  




 provides	
  the	
  learner	
  informa4on	
  with:

                                                          Where I want
                                                             to be




Where I am
    feedback                               	
  



	
  Sugges)ons,	
  hints,	
  or	
  cues	
  for	
  improvement
     ....more	
  effec)ve	
  for	
  learning	
  than	
  praise	
  or	
  
        comments	
  about	
  performance
ENGAGE Learners in the Assessment process
Do you show students what GOOD
          writing looks like?




你能不能示范给学生看良好的写作像什么样子?
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Why should I write?
3. Meaningful Writing
Create authentic reasons for writing!
Labels          Journal
                                         Letter-writing




Email


                                    Notes and Messages
Writing Genres
  •	

   Journal Entries
  •	

   Personal Letter
  •	

   Greeting Card
  •	

  •	

  •	

         Schedule/Things to Do List
         Inner Monologue Representing Internal Conflicts
         Classified or Personal Ads
                                                                    What to write?
  •	

   Personal Essay or Philosophical Questions
  •	

   Top Ten List/Glossary or Dictionary
  •	

   Poetry
  •	

   Song Lyrics
  •	

   Autobiographical Essay
  •	

   Contest Entry Application
  •	

   Business Letter or Correspondence/Persuasive or Advocacy
         Letter
  •	

   Biographical Summary
  •	

   Critique of a Published Source
  •	

   Speech or Debate
  •	

   Historical Times Context Essay
  •	

   Textbook Article
  •	

   Science Article or Report/Business Article or Report
  •	

   Lesson Plan
  •	

   Encyclopedia Article
  •	

   Short Scene from a Play with Notes for Stage Directions
  •	

   Short Scene from a Movie with Notes for Camera Shots
  •	

   Dialogue of a Conversation among Two or More People
  •	

   Short Story
  •	

   Adventure Magazine Story
  •	

   Ghost Story                                                         46
  •	

   Myth, Tall Tale, or Fairy Tale
  •	

   Talk Show Interview or Panel
•	

   Picture book
•	

   Chart or Diagram with Explanation and Analysis
•	

   Brochure or Newsletter
•	

   Time Line or Chain of Events
•	

   Map with Explanation and Analysis
•	

   Magazine or TV Advertisement or Infomercial
•	

   Restaurant Description and Menu
•	

   Travel Brochure Description
•	

   How-To or Directions Booklet
•	

   Receipts, Applications, Deeds, Budgets or Other Documents
•	

   Wedding, Graduation or Special Event Invitation
•	

   Birth Certificate
•	

   Local News Report
•	

   Pop-Up book
•	

   Review and Poster for a Movie, Book, or TV Program
•	

   Board Game or Trivial Pursuit with Answers and Rules
•	

   Comic Strip or Graphic Novel excerpt
•	

   Power Point Presentation
•	

   Informational Video
•	

   Web Site
•	

   Future News Story
•	

   Letter to the Editor
•	

   Newspaper or Magazine Feature/Human Interest Story
•	

   Obituary, Eulogy or Tribute
•	

   News Program Story or Announcement
•	

   Tabloid Article
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Vary the types of writing you assign to students




        Who is the audience?

        What is the purpose of writing?

        What writing products will they create?
Writing from Day 1
   从第一天开始,让学生用中文写东西。


Encourage use of characters



Support writing for meaning



Allow feedback for learning
Adopt an Egg Project

          Decorate an egg


Write a description of egg in Chinese


   Introduce Adopted egg to class


    Create an ID for Adopted Egg


Record daily activities of Adopted egg




What did we learn?
Descriptions, parts of body, family, colours, dates, days of the
week, numbers, nationalities, likes/dislikes, daily routine, S.T.V.P.O
Adopt an Egg Project
• Today you will receive your egg.
• 今天你收到一个鸡蛋。

• You will take it home and decorate it.
• 你要把这个鸡蛋带回家 。画眼睛,头发,鼻
  子etc.,

• You will care for your egg and write a weekly diary
  about the adventures of your egg using the S.T.V.O.
  rule.
• 这个鸡蛋是你领养的。每天要保护它。你也
  要写一个日记 (你的鸡蛋喜欢什么?它的日常
  生活是什么?)
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Adopt an Animal Project




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54
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Expect and Accept only the BEST!
      只接受最好的工作
A year-long Project



                 Welcome to Chinese classes!
Your parents have just told you they have bought a luxurious
 hotel in Beijing. In just a month you will be moving to live in
                              China.
“欢迎您到华语班来!你的父母已告诉你,他们已
   经在北京买了一家高级豪华的酒店。
    一个月以后,你将去中国住.”
Support	
  deep	
  learning
Learning
Outcomes
September / October
           九月 / 十月




准备一本护照 | 打包行李 | Make a list of clothes
          to take |
November
 十一月
December
 十二月
Transport, location, directions, rooms and furniture, greetings, family members, packing a suitcase, buying a
                                                   ticket,
Work Experience: Meeting guests, finding your way around, Planning an Itinerary for a day’s
                                          outing
Use authentic materials like - maps, tickets, posters, schedules, and menus etc.,
灯       电视
         床



镜子


                  桌子
橱柜
My Daily Routine:         My Daily Routine:
   6am - Arrive at work      我早上六点到达工作
  6:30am - Set up tables      我早上六点半.....
6:30am - Service breakfast      七点....
   10am - Clean tables          十点....
You go out with friends to a restaurant.You have a bad
      experience. Write a letter of complaint.
Intro: Greeting
  Step 1: When did this happen?
   Step 2: Who were you with?      TASK: Brainstorm in
Step 3: What was the name of the
             restaurant?              small groups
   Step 4: What did you order?      what happened at
 Step 5: What was the problem?
     Step 6: How did you feel?
                                     the restaurant
     Step 7: Closing and date.
Plan a 3 day Itinerary for a guest at the hotel

                  计划三天的行程,给酒店的客人


•   Local areas of interest

•   Days, times

•   Transport

•   Buy tickets

•   Restaurants/shopping
January 一月
February 二月




     Interview a Sports Person
A year-long Project
                                        “欢迎您到华语
                                        班来!你的父母
                                        已告诉你,他们
                                        已经在北京买了
                                        一家高级豪华的
                                          酒店。
                                        一个月以后,你
                                         将去中国住.


http://www.creativechinese.com/2012/02/18/your-parents-have-just-
                    bought-a-luxurious-hotel/
1. Writing Journals
2. Plan a Writing Task
• Generate ideas       想一想
• Organize content    组织内容
• First draft         写第一稿
• Proofread

• Edit             复习一下
• Student reflection

• Final draft
3. Meaningful Writing
A balanced Chinese writing program
                   the fence
   Remembering             Modelled Writing         Writing for a Purpose
    Characters           (Teacher generated model   (Student generated writing)
  (Saturday session)              writing)




                                                    I feel that....

                                                    I enjoy....

                                                    I wish....

                                                    I hope....

                                                    My opinion is....
Presentation and Handouts




   www.creativechinese.com
Email: shaz@creativechinese.com

Let the students write Chinese!

  • 1.
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    2. The Planningprocess 在写作前计划
  • 4.
    3. Meaningful Writing 有意义的写作
  • 5.
  • 6.
    What does yourwriting program look like? Mechanics of Writing Formula Writing Character writing on grids Copy sentences Radicals / Stroke order Prepared writing tasks 6
  • 7.
    Let the studentswrite! Mechanics of Writing Formula Writing Character writing on grids Copy sentences Radicals / Stroke order Prepared writing tasks My thinking 我的想法 My opinions 我的意见 My feelings 我的感情 My suggestions 我的建议 7
  • 8.
    What does yourwriting program look like? the fence Remembering Modelled Writing Writing for a Purpose Characters (Teacher generated model (Student generated writing) (Saturday session) writing) I feel that.... I enjoy.... I wish.... I hope.... My opinion is....
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    Purpose of writingis to..... e communicatet Opinions Ideas Suggestions Recommendations 9
  • 10.
    Do you encouragestudents to express themselves? Formula Writing Express myself! I hope there is a new series of Dr. Who. I think Britain’s Got Talent is the greatest! I especially like watching music videos, because I want to learn to play the guitar. 10
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    Expressing my opinion matters.. I think... I feel... I wish... My opinion is... I hope... 11
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    Why use aChinese Journal? 为什么写中文日记? • Opinions and Ideas • Provides Feedback • S.T.P.V.O • Frequency of writing • Express THEIR opinion, not increases the teachers • Reflect on learning • Natural writing that is • Record of writing progress owned by students • Breaks down fear of • Learning of new vocabulary writing / using correct • Differentiation - Weaker characters etc., students can excel • Emphasizes PROCESS of writing 12
  • 13.
  • 14.
    Chinese Journals 1. Threetimes a week, you will write an entry in your 日记.You can use 英文 and 中文 to start with. 2. The Journal is where you will write your thoughts, opinions, and likes/dislikes about anything.You may also illustrate your journal. 3. Every Friday, I will collect your Journals and give you feedback about your writing.
  • 15.
  • 16.
    Writing is a process, and students are permitted to make mistakes! 写作是一个过 程,并允许学生 犯错误!
  • 18.
    My Word Bank •store new words • expand vocabulary • easy to refer to.. • customized to each individual student 18
  • 19.
    Allow students toadd to the Word Wall Word Bank 字银行 -  ecomes a Reference for the class b -  xtends vocabulary beyond set e characters -  asier to retrieve vocabulary e Students keep their own Word Wall in a Folder 19
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  • 21.
  • 22.
    There’s a Celebrityin my Journal Week 在周记里有名人(学生在他们的日记里写一个名人.) What does he look like? 他是什么样子的? What do you like about him? 关于他你喜欢他什么? What don’t you like about him? 关于他你不喜欢他什么? What kind of person is he? 他是什么样的人呢? What does he do best? 22 他(是)做什么最好?
  • 23.
    Word Order 句子中的词序 S.T. P.V.O 我 I 星期一 踢 足球 Monday kicked football 在学校 at school 23
  • 24.
    Tenses 过去,现在和将来时态 • Past 我以前....... • Present 我现在....... • Future 我将去....... 24
  • 25.
    Writing is a Process. 我周末打算...... 25
  • 26.
    Experimenting and Mistakes arecentral to the writing Process. 26
  • 27.
  • 28.
    Teach the WritingProcess • Generate ideas 想一想 • Organize content 组织内容 • First draft 写第一稿 • Proofread 复习一下 28
  • 29.
    1. Generate ideas产生想法 You are a blogger for a website about what it’s like to be a teenager in the UK My interests Friends Introduction of self Hopes for the Difficulties future 29
  • 30.
    1. Generate ideas You are on work experience in a Health Club and need to write a web page List available Benefits of Day and time classes regular exercise of classes Importance of Getting fit keeping healthy 51 30
  • 31.
    1. Generate ideas You are writing to a Chinese e-pal about your Easter break. Explain Easter What did you break do at home? What you did with friends? Plans for the A boring day? weekend? 31
  • 32.
    STEP 1: Generateideas in English 想⼀一想 The type of house do you live in Events where you live -house/flat? -Tourist attractions? -like/dislike your house? Why? -What is there to do in summer? winter? -compare your house with housing in China? -Festivals? / celebrations? -how long lived there? Write a Blog about where you live. Describe the place you live Where you want to live in the future -what your city/town is like? -Type of area you would like to live in? -what is there for young people to do? -What would be there for you? -what you like about it / dislike? Why? -Why? 32
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    STEP 2: Organizecontent (Chinese) 组织内容 33
  • 34.
    Mind Maps 创建一个心地图 34 http://www.mindmeister.com/
  • 35.
    STEP 3: Write afirst draft 写初稿 35
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    STEP 4: Proofreadand Edit 编辑你的写作 I learn best when I am given opportunities to reflect on my learning and are given advice on how to make 36 improvements.
  • 37.
      feedback 反馈     provides  the  learner  informa4on  with: Where I want to be Where I am
  • 38.
      feedback    Sugges)ons,  hints,  or  cues  for  improvement ....more  effec)ve  for  learning  than  praise  or   comments  about  performance
  • 39.
    ENGAGE Learners inthe Assessment process
  • 40.
    Do you showstudents what GOOD writing looks like? 你能不能示范给学生看良好的写作像什么样子?
  • 41.
  • 42.
  • 43.
  • 44.
  • 45.
    Create authentic reasonsfor writing! Labels Journal Letter-writing Email Notes and Messages
  • 46.
    Writing Genres • Journal Entries • Personal Letter • Greeting Card • • • Schedule/Things to Do List Inner Monologue Representing Internal Conflicts Classified or Personal Ads What to write? • Personal Essay or Philosophical Questions • Top Ten List/Glossary or Dictionary • Poetry • Song Lyrics • Autobiographical Essay • Contest Entry Application • Business Letter or Correspondence/Persuasive or Advocacy Letter • Biographical Summary • Critique of a Published Source • Speech or Debate • Historical Times Context Essay • Textbook Article • Science Article or Report/Business Article or Report • Lesson Plan • Encyclopedia Article • Short Scene from a Play with Notes for Stage Directions • Short Scene from a Movie with Notes for Camera Shots • Dialogue of a Conversation among Two or More People • Short Story • Adventure Magazine Story • Ghost Story 46 • Myth, Tall Tale, or Fairy Tale • Talk Show Interview or Panel
  • 47.
    Picture book • Chart or Diagram with Explanation and Analysis • Brochure or Newsletter • Time Line or Chain of Events • Map with Explanation and Analysis • Magazine or TV Advertisement or Infomercial • Restaurant Description and Menu • Travel Brochure Description • How-To or Directions Booklet • Receipts, Applications, Deeds, Budgets or Other Documents • Wedding, Graduation or Special Event Invitation • Birth Certificate • Local News Report • Pop-Up book • Review and Poster for a Movie, Book, or TV Program • Board Game or Trivial Pursuit with Answers and Rules • Comic Strip or Graphic Novel excerpt • Power Point Presentation • Informational Video • Web Site • Future News Story • Letter to the Editor • Newspaper or Magazine Feature/Human Interest Story • Obituary, Eulogy or Tribute • News Program Story or Announcement • Tabloid Article 47
  • 48.
    Vary the typesof writing you assign to students Who is the audience? What is the purpose of writing? What writing products will they create?
  • 49.
    Writing from Day1 从第一天开始,让学生用中文写东西。 Encourage use of characters Support writing for meaning Allow feedback for learning
  • 50.
    Adopt an EggProject Decorate an egg Write a description of egg in Chinese Introduce Adopted egg to class Create an ID for Adopted Egg Record daily activities of Adopted egg What did we learn? Descriptions, parts of body, family, colours, dates, days of the week, numbers, nationalities, likes/dislikes, daily routine, S.T.V.P.O
  • 51.
    Adopt an EggProject • Today you will receive your egg. • 今天你收到一个鸡蛋。 • You will take it home and decorate it. • 你要把这个鸡蛋带回家 。画眼睛,头发,鼻 子etc., • You will care for your egg and write a weekly diary about the adventures of your egg using the S.T.V.O. rule. • 这个鸡蛋是你领养的。每天要保护它。你也 要写一个日记 (你的鸡蛋喜欢什么?它的日常 生活是什么?) 51
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    Adopt an AnimalProject 52
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    Expect and Acceptonly the BEST! 只接受最好的工作
  • 57.
    A year-long Project Welcome to Chinese classes! Your parents have just told you they have bought a luxurious hotel in Beijing. In just a month you will be moving to live in China. “欢迎您到华语班来!你的父母已告诉你,他们已 经在北京买了一家高级豪华的酒店。 一个月以后,你将去中国住.”
  • 58.
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    September / October 九月 / 十月 准备一本护照 | 打包行李 | Make a list of clothes to take |
  • 61.
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  • 65.
    Transport, location, directions,rooms and furniture, greetings, family members, packing a suitcase, buying a ticket,
  • 66.
    Work Experience: Meetingguests, finding your way around, Planning an Itinerary for a day’s outing
  • 67.
    Use authentic materialslike - maps, tickets, posters, schedules, and menus etc.,
  • 68.
    电视 床 镜子 桌子 橱柜
  • 69.
    My Daily Routine: My Daily Routine: 6am - Arrive at work 我早上六点到达工作 6:30am - Set up tables 我早上六点半..... 6:30am - Service breakfast 七点.... 10am - Clean tables 十点....
  • 70.
    You go outwith friends to a restaurant.You have a bad experience. Write a letter of complaint.
  • 71.
    Intro: Greeting Step 1: When did this happen? Step 2: Who were you with? TASK: Brainstorm in Step 3: What was the name of the restaurant? small groups Step 4: What did you order? what happened at Step 5: What was the problem? Step 6: How did you feel? the restaurant Step 7: Closing and date.
  • 74.
    Plan a 3day Itinerary for a guest at the hotel 计划三天的行程,给酒店的客人 • Local areas of interest • Days, times • Transport • Buy tickets • Restaurants/shopping
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    February 二月 Interview a Sports Person
  • 77.
    A year-long Project “欢迎您到华语 班来!你的父母 已告诉你,他们 已经在北京买了 一家高级豪华的 酒店。 一个月以后,你 将去中国住. http://www.creativechinese.com/2012/02/18/your-parents-have-just- bought-a-luxurious-hotel/
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    2. Plan aWriting Task • Generate ideas 想一想 • Organize content 组织内容 • First draft 写第一稿 • Proofread • Edit 复习一下 • Student reflection • Final draft
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    A balanced Chinesewriting program the fence Remembering Modelled Writing Writing for a Purpose Characters (Teacher generated model (Student generated writing) (Saturday session) writing) I feel that.... I enjoy.... I wish.... I hope.... My opinion is....
  • 82.
    Presentation and Handouts www.creativechinese.com Email: shaz@creativechinese.com