Sarah, georgia, danielle and shannon feedbck letter
George
1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear George,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 18th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a good understanding
of the brief, with some good comments on community and some good use of
original images. You were focused on the needs of your target audience. I
thought that you presented clearly, and that the ideas were clear and workable.
I did, however feel that you could refer to the brief more specifically, linking
your ideas to our requirements and at the next stage think you need to engage
the audience more – through eye contact and more open body language.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com