1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Rosie,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 18th October. It was a
good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help
get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an awareness of
regeneration and issues within the community. You had prepared well, done
research and worked well together.
I did, however feel that you could have given more evidence of your research
and findings, as well as making more specific reference to the brief. At the next
stage you could do more on your target audience and HOW you will appeal
them.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was good and something we are interested
in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com