Freja gave a presentation about local regeneration and ideas to get people involved. The letter provides feedback, praising Freja's awareness of regeneration issues, research conducted, and work with others. It suggests commenting more on current problems with Spider Park and explaining how the audience will be appealed to. Overall the presentation was good and the regeneration group looks forward to seeing Freja's ideas develop while addressing the feedback and staying focused on the task.

1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Freja,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 18th October. It was a
good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help
get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an awareness of
regeneration – both its issues and the effects. You were aware of your audience
with evidence of a survey. You had prepared well, done research and worked
well together.
I did, however feel that you could have also commented more on the problems
currently with Spider Park. At the next stage you could do more on HOW you
will appeal to your specific audience.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was good and something we are interested
in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com