1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Aisling,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 18th October. It was a
good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help
get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an understanding of
the issues of regeneration and of the community. You were focused on the
needs of your target audience, with consideration of survey results. I thought
that you presented clearly, and that the ideas were clear.
I did, however feel that you could refer to the brief more specifically, linking
your ideas to our requirements and at the next stage you could be more
detailed on the products for your campaign and where your filmed product
would be shown (e.g. TV channel/programmes).
Overall, I feel that the presentation was good and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com