1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Robin,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 15th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an excellent
understanding of the brief, with clear reference to many of the issues we have
mentioned. You had a great focus on the importance of audience and about
getting them to act. You also made great reference to importance of social
networking.
I did, however feel that you could give have used more visuals to support your
points and at the next stage you need to make more of the actual content of
your campaign and reasons behind your decisions.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was very good and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
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