1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Milly,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 15th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had an excellent
understanding of the brief, with clear reference to many of the issues we have
mentioned. You had a strong knowledge of the local area and of areas which
especially need work. You had a good focus on the importance of audience and
their needs. It was a clear and well planned presentation.
I did, however feel that you could be more specific WHY Wild Stevenage (and
other campaigns) had good websites, what made it good. At the next stage you
need more on HOW your campaign will be made to appeal to the audience.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was excellent and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com