1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Alanah,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 18th October. It was a
very good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can
help get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had a clear understanding
of the brief and were very well organized in terms of the project. I thought that
you presented exceptionally well, with confidence and fluency, and that the
ideas were clear and workable.
I did, however feel that you could consider pros and cons of the methods of
promotion you would use slightly more and at the next stage think you could do
more to include designs/ideas with feedback from your target audience.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was excellent and something we are very
interested in hearing more about.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com