1. Regeneration
23th October 2013
Dear Jemma,
Thank you very much for your presentation dated 22nd October. It was a
good insight into your progress and ideas so far considering how you can help
get people involved in local regeneration.
From watching your presentation, I can see that you had some good references
to audience and some good consideration of the issues. Your part of the
presentation seemed well prepared.
I did, however feel that you need to be more organsied as a group and make
more reference to audience and their needs. At the next stage you need to be
ready to discuss your audience and campaign ideas in much more detail.
Overall, I feel that the presentation was fine and something we may be
interested in hearing more about in the future.
I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop and how you take on board the
advice given here and the feedback from those also watching your presentation.
I look forward to the week beginning 9th December when I get to see the
development of your campaign and some draft work.
Remember to keep referring to the brief so you stay focused on the task.
Kind Regards
E Sim
On behalf of Regeneration.
Regen House, High Street, London| 0181 811 8181 | info@regeneration.co.uk
www.regeneration.com