This document discusses revisions made to a film poster and website for a project called "Eye For An Eye." For the poster, the student removed an image of the protagonist to focus attention on the antagonist. They also blended the antagonist image into the background and changed the font and strap line. For the website, corrections included adapting the transparency of the antagonist image, moving actor names outside the title, changing social media button shapes, shrinking the title, adding space for a trailer and billing box, and rearranging components. The student aimed to make both the poster and website more professional and aligned with horror-thriller conventions.

1. POSTER - WEBSITE
Eye For An Eye: 2nd
Draft

2. 1st
Draft: 2nd
Draft:
Eye For An Eye: Before & After

3. Eye For An Eye: Poster 2nd
Draft Corrections
Reveal less of
the killer
In the feedback Powerpoint prior, I stated
that I had a lot of amendments to make. This
is with the intention of improving my poster
in terms of making it have a professional
outlook and so that it sticks with the
conventions of the Horror-Thriller genre.
Rearrange the
height and size
of image
Change Strap
Line Font
Change “deadly
past” to “deadly
fantasy”
Blend image
into background
Change font and
its size

4. Eye For An Eye: 2nd
Draft Changes
Here is my second draft poster, and I have implemented all the feedback
and changes required from my first draft poster. I have asked feedback
from my teachers, other class members and my target audience, as they
are the ones that my poster is appealing to. As my first draft poster was
said to be interesting, I tried to incorporate and keep the same
conventions in my second draft poster. I tried to make the execution less
messy and more refined and distinguished by having less images in the
background, as I have removed the image of the protagonist because it
seems distracting and takes the attention away from the killer. Given that
the image of the antagonist and protagonist were very uneven, the original
images are very dissimilar in size and therefore it was hard to even them
out, and both images looked crowded on the page and therefore looked
unprofessional and unfinished. For these reasons, I’ve decided to remove
the image of the protagonist altogether. As for my first draft both the
images were amateur in the sense that they didn’t blend in well with the
background, after having removed the image of the protagonist I used the
‘Opacity’ tool to feather and blend in the image of the antagonist so that it
looks as though she is part of the background with the misty and
mysterious essence and significance of the smoky background. My
inspiration when creating my film poster was ‘The Woman in Black’s’ film
poster, and my intentions were to have the same horror conventions that
will have a similar effect on my film poster.

5. 1st
Draft 2nd
Draft
Eye For An Eye: Before & After

6. Eye For An Eye: Website 2nd
Draft Corrections
Adapted the
transparency of
antagonist
Move the actors’ names
out from within the
title
Changed the shape of
the social media
buttons
Shrink the title
Provide space for
trailer and billing
box
Rearrange the
positioning of the
components on the
page
There were many corrections that I had
to insert to make my website much more
professional by using and developing
the forms and conventions of a Horror-
Thriller genre.

7. Eye For An Eye: Website 2nd
Draft Corrections
Adapted the
transparency of
antagonist
Move the actors’ names
out from within the
title
Changed the shape of
the social media
buttons
Shrink the title
Provide space for
trailer and billing
box
Rearrange the
positioning of the
components on the
page
There were many corrections that I had
to insert to make my website much more
professional by using and developing
the forms and conventions of a Horror-
Thriller genre.