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First Draft Feedback WWW:  I really  love the use of one colour for the fonts because it keeps an ongoing theme. I really like the pictures because they are in a school environment and they are not boring to look at; they are quite fun.  EBI:  the colours and fonts are completely different compared to your front cover.

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Content Page Feedback for 1st Draft

  • 1. Content Page Feedback for 1 st First Draft By Saba Kebede
  • 2. First Draft Feedback WWW: I really love the use of one colour for the fonts because it keeps an ongoing theme. I really like the pictures because they are in a school environment and they are not boring to look at; they are quite fun. EBI: the colours and fonts are completely different compared to your front cover.