SlideShare a Scribd company logo
Class 21
Improve your grade!
Essay revisions due this
Friday. Get a new
grade! Retake any
vocab test at our Final.
Get a new grade!
AGENDA
 Vocabulary
Test #5
 Writing
Workshop
 Self-
Assessment
Revising Essay
#4
On your own paper, clearly identify these parts
in the margin with brackets and numbers
1. Where you have defined the problem
2. Your thesis
3. Your clearly described solution: your plan for
implementation
4. Your convincing argument in support of the proposed
solution
5. Where you have Indicated and responded to Readers’
Objections and Questions
6. Where you have evaluated alternative solutions
7. Your conclusion
Pass your papers to me
and I will pass them to
other students.
Responders
 Carefully read the essay you are reviewing, noting
only obvious typos or other errors by underlining. You
do not need to comment. Do not ask the writer
questions. If you don’t understand the essay, tell the
writer in response to the revision guide or in the
margins.
 Answer the revision guide questions on another
sheet of paper or on the back of the writer’s essay.
 Refer to the parts of the essay the writer has
identified in order to respond appropriately.
 Be thorough.
When you finish
 Return the essay and your comments to the
writer.
 While you wait for your essay to be returned,
answer the revision guide questions for
yourself.
 When you receive your essay, look at the
feedback. Think about how you will revise your
essay.
 Begin the revision process.
The blogging post points (150) require self-
assessment. Consider three aspects of your
responses: First, how many of the posts did you
make? Second, what was the quality of your
response? Third, how timely were your
submissions? Write a paragraph or two justifying
your grade. You may submit this to me by email
as soon as you finish post 23, but you must send
it before Friday at noon.
Reminder: Self-Assessment Due
Homework
Review your essay suggestions.
Revise Essay #4 accordingly
Prepare for Vocabulary Test
Make-up
Essay Revisions Due Friday at
noon
Self Assessment Due Friday at
noon
Submit essay #4 via Kaizena
before Final

More Related Content

What's hot

Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5
Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5
Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5
grendel8729
 
Class 18
Class 18 Class 18
Class 18
jordanlachance
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
jordanlachance
 
Class 23 writing workshop 4
Class 23 writing workshop 4Class 23 writing workshop 4
Class 23 writing workshop 4
jordanlachance
 
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4 Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
kimpalmore
 
Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5 Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
jordanlachance
 
The English Exam
The English ExamThe English Exam
The English Exam
pepe.moranco
 
Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)
Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)
Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)
university of Johannesburg
 
E3 m3.4 Peer editing
E3 m3.4 Peer editingE3 m3.4 Peer editing
E3 m3.4 Peer editing
Mondstrahl
 
D21-EWRT 1A-W18
D21-EWRT 1A-W18D21-EWRT 1A-W18
D21-EWRT 1A-W18
Brian Malone
 
How to improve your score in IELTS Writing section
How to improve your score in IELTS Writing sectionHow to improve your score in IELTS Writing section
How to improve your score in IELTS Writing section
Global Opportunities
 
Cae rc
Cae rcCae rc
Mock exam marks
Mock exam marksMock exam marks
Mock exam marks
Emma Wilkinson
 
1 a 15 concept essay workshop
1 a 15 concept essay workshop 1 a 15 concept essay workshop
1 a 15 concept essay workshop
jordanlachance
 
Sec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partii
Sec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partiiSec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partii
Sec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partii
Adrian Peeris
 
1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game
1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game
1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game
jordanlachance
 
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
jordanlachance
 
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
jordanlachance
 
Building Community
Building Community   Building Community
Building Community
QTIP2
 
Tort reflections
Tort reflectionsTort reflections
Tort reflections
kkhayer18
 

What's hot (20)

Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5
Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5
Ewrt1 a f15 class 15.5
 
Class 18
Class 18 Class 18
Class 18
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
 
Class 23 writing workshop 4
Class 23 writing workshop 4Class 23 writing workshop 4
Class 23 writing workshop 4
 
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4 Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
 
Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5 Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 23 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
 
The English Exam
The English ExamThe English Exam
The English Exam
 
Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)
Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)
Educ 3 a ass 1 general feedback(1)
 
E3 m3.4 Peer editing
E3 m3.4 Peer editingE3 m3.4 Peer editing
E3 m3.4 Peer editing
 
D21-EWRT 1A-W18
D21-EWRT 1A-W18D21-EWRT 1A-W18
D21-EWRT 1A-W18
 
How to improve your score in IELTS Writing section
How to improve your score in IELTS Writing sectionHow to improve your score in IELTS Writing section
How to improve your score in IELTS Writing section
 
Cae rc
Cae rcCae rc
Cae rc
 
Mock exam marks
Mock exam marksMock exam marks
Mock exam marks
 
1 a 15 concept essay workshop
1 a 15 concept essay workshop 1 a 15 concept essay workshop
1 a 15 concept essay workshop
 
Sec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partii
Sec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partiiSec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partii
Sec3 english language_comprehension_the summary question_partii
 
1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game
1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game
1 a 13 writing workshop essay 3 vocab game
 
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
 
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
1 a 13 concept essay workshop vocab game
 
Building Community
Building Community   Building Community
Building Community
 
Tort reflections
Tort reflectionsTort reflections
Tort reflections
 

Viewers also liked

resume
resumeresume
Якісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнє
Якісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнєЯкісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнє
Якісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнє
Електронні книги Ранок
 
Tendencia de la informática y sus incidencias
Tendencia de la informática y sus incidenciasTendencia de la informática y sus incidencias
Tendencia de la informática y sus incidencias
jey1312
 
Seco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDF
Seco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDFSeco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDF
Seco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDF
David Medhat
 
Chhaya_Resume
Chhaya_ResumeChhaya_Resume
Chhaya_Resume
Chhaya Gupta
 
Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.
Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.
Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.
Руслана Романенко
 
Jae da silva resume dec 2015
Jae da silva resume dec 2015Jae da silva resume dec 2015
Jae da silva resume dec 2015
Jae Presa
 
Lc
LcLc
Ensayo
Ensayo Ensayo
Ensayo
Ensayo Ensayo
Использование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образования
Использование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образованияИспользование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образования
Использование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образования
Юлия Андросюк
 

Viewers also liked (11)

resume
resumeresume
resume
 
Якісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнє
Якісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнєЯкісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнє
Якісна освіта — це інвестиції у майбутнє
 
Tendencia de la informática y sus incidencias
Tendencia de la informática y sus incidenciasTendencia de la informática y sus incidencias
Tendencia de la informática y sus incidencias
 
Seco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDF
Seco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDFSeco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDF
Seco Troubleshooting for ACOs Part 1.PDF
 
Chhaya_Resume
Chhaya_ResumeChhaya_Resume
Chhaya_Resume
 
Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.
Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.
Дай руку, першокласнику! Вільшанська ЗОШ І-ІІІ ст.
 
Jae da silva resume dec 2015
Jae da silva resume dec 2015Jae da silva resume dec 2015
Jae da silva resume dec 2015
 
Lc
LcLc
Lc
 
Ensayo
Ensayo Ensayo
Ensayo
 
Ensayo
Ensayo Ensayo
Ensayo
 
Использование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образования
Использование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образованияИспользование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образования
Использование технологии смешанного обучения в системе школьного образования
 

Similar to Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5

Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5 Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
jordanlachance
 
Class 23 final writing workshop 4
Class 23 final writing workshop 4Class 23 final writing workshop 4
Class 23 final writing workshop 4
jordanlachance
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
jordanlachance
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copyClass 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
kimpalmore
 
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4 Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
kimpalmore
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copyClass 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
kimpalmore
 
1 a 41 writers workshop
1 a 41 writers workshop1 a 41 writers workshop
1 a 41 writers workshop
jordanlachance
 
Class 41 writers workshop
Class 41 writers workshopClass 41 writers workshop
Class 41 writers workshop
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a class 30
Ewrt 1 a class 30Ewrt 1 a class 30
Ewrt 1 a class 30
kimpalmore
 
1 a class 8 argument essay workshop
1 a  class 8 argument essay workshop 1 a  class 8 argument essay workshop
1 a class 8 argument essay workshop
kimpalmore
 
Peer Revision Ppt
Peer Revision PptPeer Revision Ppt
Peer Revision Ppt
Nathan Massicotte
 
Class 22 1 a
Class 22 1 aClass 22 1 a
Class 22 1 a
jordanlachance
 
101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20
101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20
101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20
JohannaTollefson
 

Similar to Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5 (13)

Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5 Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5
 
Class 23 final writing workshop 4
Class 23 final writing workshop 4Class 23 final writing workshop 4
Class 23 final writing workshop 4
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4Class 22 final writing workshop 4
Class 22 final writing workshop 4
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copyClass 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
 
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4 Class 21 final writing workshop 4
Class 21 final writing workshop 4
 
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copyClass 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
Class 22 final writing workshop 4 copy
 
1 a 41 writers workshop
1 a 41 writers workshop1 a 41 writers workshop
1 a 41 writers workshop
 
Class 41 writers workshop
Class 41 writers workshopClass 41 writers workshop
Class 41 writers workshop
 
Ewrt 1 a class 30
Ewrt 1 a class 30Ewrt 1 a class 30
Ewrt 1 a class 30
 
1 a class 8 argument essay workshop
1 a  class 8 argument essay workshop 1 a  class 8 argument essay workshop
1 a class 8 argument essay workshop
 
Peer Revision Ppt
Peer Revision PptPeer Revision Ppt
Peer Revision Ppt
 
Class 22 1 a
Class 22 1 aClass 22 1 a
Class 22 1 a
 
101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20
101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20
101 unit 2 assignment sheet spring 20
 

More from jordanlachance

Class 2 online
Class 2 onlineClass 2 online
Class 2 online
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybridEwrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybridEwrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction
Ewrt 1 a online introduction Ewrt 1 a online introduction
Ewrt 1 a online introduction
jordanlachance
 
How to highlight in kaizena
How to highlight in kaizenaHow to highlight in kaizena
How to highlight in kaizena
jordanlachance
 
Kaizena directions 2017
Kaizena directions 2017Kaizena directions 2017
Kaizena directions 2017
jordanlachance
 
Wordpress user name directions
Wordpress user name directionsWordpress user name directions
Wordpress user name directions
jordanlachance
 
Class 20 n online
Class 20 n onlineClass 20 n online
Class 20 n online
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 c class 27 night special
Ewrt 1 c class 27 night specialEwrt 1 c class 27 night special
Ewrt 1 c class 27 night special
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 c spring 2017new
Ewrt 1 c spring 2017newEwrt 1 c spring 2017new
Ewrt 1 c spring 2017new
jordanlachance
 
Essay concept hunger games
 Essay  concept hunger games Essay  concept hunger games
Essay concept hunger games
jordanlachance
 
Doc jun 7 2017 - 8-54 am
Doc   jun 7 2017 - 8-54 amDoc   jun 7 2017 - 8-54 am
Doc jun 7 2017 - 8-54 am
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 c class 25 night intro special
Ewrt 1 c class 25 night intro specialEwrt 1 c class 25 night intro special
Ewrt 1 c class 25 night intro special
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
jordanlachance
 
Ewrt 1 c class 23 online
Ewrt 1 c class 23 online Ewrt 1 c class 23 online
Ewrt 1 c class 23 online
jordanlachance
 

More from jordanlachance (20)

Class 2 online
Class 2 onlineClass 2 online
Class 2 online
 
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybridEwrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
 
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybridEwrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
Ewrt 1 a class 1 hybrid
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction
Ewrt 1 a online introduction Ewrt 1 a online introduction
Ewrt 1 a online introduction
 
How to highlight in kaizena
How to highlight in kaizenaHow to highlight in kaizena
How to highlight in kaizena
 
Kaizena directions 2017
Kaizena directions 2017Kaizena directions 2017
Kaizena directions 2017
 
Wordpress user name directions
Wordpress user name directionsWordpress user name directions
Wordpress user name directions
 
Class 20 n online
Class 20 n onlineClass 20 n online
Class 20 n online
 
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybridEwrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
Ewrt 1 a online introduction hybrid
 
Ewrt 1 c class 27 night special
Ewrt 1 c class 27 night specialEwrt 1 c class 27 night special
Ewrt 1 c class 27 night special
 
Ewrt 1 c spring 2017new
Ewrt 1 c spring 2017newEwrt 1 c spring 2017new
Ewrt 1 c spring 2017new
 
Essay concept hunger games
 Essay  concept hunger games Essay  concept hunger games
Essay concept hunger games
 
Doc jun 7 2017 - 8-54 am
Doc   jun 7 2017 - 8-54 amDoc   jun 7 2017 - 8-54 am
Doc jun 7 2017 - 8-54 am
 
Ewrt 1 c class 25 night intro special
Ewrt 1 c class 25 night intro specialEwrt 1 c class 25 night intro special
Ewrt 1 c class 25 night intro special
 
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
 
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
Ewrt 1 c class 24 special spring 2017
 
Ewrt 1 c class 23 online
Ewrt 1 c class 23 online Ewrt 1 c class 23 online
Ewrt 1 c class 23 online
 

Recently uploaded

What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...
What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...
What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...
GeorgeMilliken2
 
How to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold Method
How to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold MethodHow to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold Method
How to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold Method
Celine George
 
Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...
Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...
Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...
Diana Rendina
 
Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...
Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...
Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...
National Information Standards Organization (NISO)
 
How to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRM
How to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRMHow to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRM
How to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRM
Celine George
 
Natural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama University
Natural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama UniversityNatural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama University
Natural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama University
Akanksha trivedi rama nursing college kanpur.
 
Your Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective Upskilling
Your Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective UpskillingYour Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective Upskilling
Your Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective Upskilling
Excellence Foundation for South Sudan
 
Life upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for student
Life upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for studentLife upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for student
Life upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for student
NgcHiNguyn25
 
How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17
How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17
How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17
Celine George
 
Présentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptx
Présentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptxPrésentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptx
Présentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptx
siemaillard
 
PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.
PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.
PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.
Dr. Shivangi Singh Parihar
 
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...
Nguyen Thanh Tu Collection
 
Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...
Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...
Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...
Dr. Vinod Kumar Kanvaria
 
A Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdf
A Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdfA Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdf
A Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdf
Jean Carlos Nunes Paixão
 
Leveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit Innovation
Leveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit InnovationLeveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit Innovation
Leveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit Innovation
TechSoup
 
Pengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptx
Pengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptxPengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptx
Pengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptx
Fajar Baskoro
 
How to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 Inventory
How to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 InventoryHow to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 Inventory
How to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 Inventory
Celine George
 
How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP Module
How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP ModuleHow to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP Module
How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP Module
Celine George
 
writing about opinions about Australia the movie
writing about opinions about Australia the moviewriting about opinions about Australia the movie
writing about opinions about Australia the movie
Nicholas Montgomery
 
South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)
South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)
South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)
Academy of Science of South Africa
 

Recently uploaded (20)

What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...
What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...
What is Digital Literacy? A guest blog from Andy McLaughlin, University of Ab...
 
How to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold Method
How to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold MethodHow to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold Method
How to Build a Module in Odoo 17 Using the Scaffold Method
 
Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...
Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...
Reimagining Your Library Space: How to Increase the Vibes in Your Library No ...
 
Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...
Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...
Pollock and Snow "DEIA in the Scholarly Landscape, Session One: Setting Expec...
 
How to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRM
How to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRMHow to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRM
How to Manage Your Lost Opportunities in Odoo 17 CRM
 
Natural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama University
Natural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama UniversityNatural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama University
Natural birth techniques - Mrs.Akanksha Trivedi Rama University
 
Your Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective Upskilling
Your Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective UpskillingYour Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective Upskilling
Your Skill Boost Masterclass: Strategies for Effective Upskilling
 
Life upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for student
Life upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for studentLife upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for student
Life upper-Intermediate B2 Workbook for student
 
How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17
How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17
How to Make a Field Mandatory in Odoo 17
 
Présentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptx
Présentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptxPrésentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptx
Présentationvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv2.pptx
 
PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.
PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.
PCOS corelations and management through Ayurveda.
 
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 8 CẢ NĂM - GLOBAL SUCCESS - NĂM HỌC 2023-2024 (CÓ FI...
 
Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...
Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...
Exploiting Artificial Intelligence for Empowering Researchers and Faculty, In...
 
A Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdf
A Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdfA Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdf
A Independência da América Espanhola LAPBOOK.pdf
 
Leveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit Innovation
Leveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit InnovationLeveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit Innovation
Leveraging Generative AI to Drive Nonprofit Innovation
 
Pengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptx
Pengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptxPengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptx
Pengantar Penggunaan Flutter - Dart programming language1.pptx
 
How to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 Inventory
How to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 InventoryHow to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 Inventory
How to Setup Warehouse & Location in Odoo 17 Inventory
 
How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP Module
How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP ModuleHow to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP Module
How to Add Chatter in the odoo 17 ERP Module
 
writing about opinions about Australia the movie
writing about opinions about Australia the moviewriting about opinions about Australia the movie
writing about opinions about Australia the movie
 
South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)
South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)
South African Journal of Science: Writing with integrity workshop (2024)
 

Class 21 writing workshop 4; vocab test 5

  • 1. Class 21 Improve your grade! Essay revisions due this Friday. Get a new grade! Retake any vocab test at our Final. Get a new grade!
  • 2. AGENDA  Vocabulary Test #5  Writing Workshop  Self- Assessment
  • 3.
  • 5. On your own paper, clearly identify these parts in the margin with brackets and numbers 1. Where you have defined the problem 2. Your thesis 3. Your clearly described solution: your plan for implementation 4. Your convincing argument in support of the proposed solution 5. Where you have Indicated and responded to Readers’ Objections and Questions 6. Where you have evaluated alternative solutions 7. Your conclusion
  • 6. Pass your papers to me and I will pass them to other students.
  • 7. Responders  Carefully read the essay you are reviewing, noting only obvious typos or other errors by underlining. You do not need to comment. Do not ask the writer questions. If you don’t understand the essay, tell the writer in response to the revision guide or in the margins.  Answer the revision guide questions on another sheet of paper or on the back of the writer’s essay.  Refer to the parts of the essay the writer has identified in order to respond appropriately.  Be thorough.
  • 8. When you finish  Return the essay and your comments to the writer.  While you wait for your essay to be returned, answer the revision guide questions for yourself.  When you receive your essay, look at the feedback. Think about how you will revise your essay.  Begin the revision process.
  • 9. The blogging post points (150) require self- assessment. Consider three aspects of your responses: First, how many of the posts did you make? Second, what was the quality of your response? Third, how timely were your submissions? Write a paragraph or two justifying your grade. You may submit this to me by email as soon as you finish post 23, but you must send it before Friday at noon. Reminder: Self-Assessment Due
  • 10. Homework Review your essay suggestions. Revise Essay #4 accordingly Prepare for Vocabulary Test Make-up Essay Revisions Due Friday at noon Self Assessment Due Friday at noon Submit essay #4 via Kaizena before Final