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Class 22: Final
EWRT 1A
 Writing Workshop: 20
participation points
AGENDA
Revising Essay
#4
1. The header: What is the font and size?
2. The heading: What is the order? Date formatting?
3. The spacing: Are there any extra spaces?
4. Introducing quotations: Do you have to? How?
5. Formatting long quotations: How many spaces do you
indent? Are there quotation marks? Where does the
final period go?
6. In-text citations. What goes in the parenthesis?
7. The works cited page? Title? Spacing? Hyperlinks? Alpha
order? Italics? Quotation marks?
Check your paper!
On your own paper, clearly identify these parts
in the margin with brackets and numbers
1. Your clever introduction
2. Where you have defined and explained the problem
3. Your thesis
4. Your clearly described solution: your plan for
implementation
5. Your convincing argument in support of the proposed
solution
6. Where you have Indicated and responded to Readers’
Objections and Questions
7. Where you have evaluated alternative solutions
8. Your conclusion
Pass your papers to me
and I will pass them to
other students.
Responders
 Carefully read the essay you are reviewing, noting
only obvious typos or other errors by underlining. You
do not need to comment. Do not ask the writer
questions. If you don’t understand the essay, tell the
writer in response to the revision guide or in the
margins.
 Answer the revision guide questions on another
sheet of paper or on the back of the writer’s essay.
 Refer to the parts of the essay the writer has
identified in order to respond appropriately.
 Be thorough.
When you finish
 Return the essay and your comments to the me.
I will check your work to ensure you have been
as helpful as possible.
 While you wait for your essay to be returned,
answer the revision guide questions for
yourself.
 When you receive your essay, look at the
feedback. Think about how you will revise your
essay.
 Begin the revision process.
Homework
Review your essay suggestions
Revise Essay #4 accordingly
Submit essay #4 electronically to my
kaizena profile at
https://kaizena.com/palmoreessaysubmis
siongmail on the due date. See syllabus if
you do not know!

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Class 22 final writing workshop 4

  • 2.  Writing Workshop: 20 participation points AGENDA
  • 4. 1. The header: What is the font and size? 2. The heading: What is the order? Date formatting? 3. The spacing: Are there any extra spaces? 4. Introducing quotations: Do you have to? How? 5. Formatting long quotations: How many spaces do you indent? Are there quotation marks? Where does the final period go? 6. In-text citations. What goes in the parenthesis? 7. The works cited page? Title? Spacing? Hyperlinks? Alpha order? Italics? Quotation marks? Check your paper!
  • 5. On your own paper, clearly identify these parts in the margin with brackets and numbers 1. Your clever introduction 2. Where you have defined and explained the problem 3. Your thesis 4. Your clearly described solution: your plan for implementation 5. Your convincing argument in support of the proposed solution 6. Where you have Indicated and responded to Readers’ Objections and Questions 7. Where you have evaluated alternative solutions 8. Your conclusion
  • 6. Pass your papers to me and I will pass them to other students.
  • 7. Responders  Carefully read the essay you are reviewing, noting only obvious typos or other errors by underlining. You do not need to comment. Do not ask the writer questions. If you don’t understand the essay, tell the writer in response to the revision guide or in the margins.  Answer the revision guide questions on another sheet of paper or on the back of the writer’s essay.  Refer to the parts of the essay the writer has identified in order to respond appropriately.  Be thorough.
  • 8. When you finish  Return the essay and your comments to the me. I will check your work to ensure you have been as helpful as possible.  While you wait for your essay to be returned, answer the revision guide questions for yourself.  When you receive your essay, look at the feedback. Think about how you will revise your essay.  Begin the revision process.
  • 9.
  • 10. Homework Review your essay suggestions Revise Essay #4 accordingly Submit essay #4 electronically to my kaizena profile at https://kaizena.com/palmoreessaysubmis siongmail on the due date. See syllabus if you do not know!