PREPARING EFFECTIVE
BUSINESS MESSAGES
RAHILA KHAN
LECTURER ENGLISH
GGPC QUETTA CANTT
5 PLANNING STEPS
1
• Identify
your
purpose
2
• Analyze
your
audience
3
• Choose
your
ideas
4
• Collect
your data
5
• Organize
your
message
1. Identify your purpose-
the objective of your message is almost
twofold: the reason for the message
itself and the creation of goodwill.
2. Analyze your audience
see the message from your receiver’s
point of view: their needs, interests,
attitudes, even their culture.
3. Choose your ideas
the ideas you include depend on the
type of message you are sending, the
situation & the cultural context.
4. Collect your data
be sure to collect enough data to support
your ideas; check names, dates, addresses
& statistics for precision.
5. Organize your message
organizing your material before writing
your first draft can prevent rambling and
unclear messages.
APPROACHES OF MESSAGE
COMMUNICATION
 DIRECT (deductive) APPROACH:
 INDIRECT (inductive) APPROACH
DIRECT APPROACH
 When your reader or listener will have a fa
vorable or neutral reaction to your messag
e, use the direct approach.
 Begin with the main idea. After the openin
g, include all necessary details and end wi
th an appropriate, friendly closing.
INDIRECT APPROACH
 When your reader or listener might rea
ct negatively to your message, you sho
uld not present the main idea in the first
paragraph.
 Begin with a buffer, give an explanation
and then introduce the main idea.
BEGINNINGS & ENDINGS:
 “first impressions are lasting”
 “we remember best what we read last”
BEGINNINGS:
 The opening of a message determines w
hether the reader continues reading, put
s the message aside or discards it.
1. Choose openings appropriate for messa
ge purpose and reader.
2. Make the openings considerate, courteo
us, concise, clear.
3. Check for completeness.
ENDINGS:
 Closing should be strong, clear & polite,
they should leave a sense of closure & g
oodwill with the receiver.
1. Make action request clear and complete
with 5 W’s and the H.
2. End on a polite, courteous thought.
3. Keep last paragraph concise and correct
.
THANKYOU!

Ch 6, planning business messages

  • 1.
    PREPARING EFFECTIVE BUSINESS MESSAGES RAHILAKHAN LECTURER ENGLISH GGPC QUETTA CANTT
  • 2.
    5 PLANNING STEPS 1 •Identify your purpose 2 • Analyze your audience 3 • Choose your ideas 4 • Collect your data 5 • Organize your message
  • 3.
    1. Identify yourpurpose- the objective of your message is almost twofold: the reason for the message itself and the creation of goodwill.
  • 4.
    2. Analyze youraudience see the message from your receiver’s point of view: their needs, interests, attitudes, even their culture.
  • 5.
    3. Choose yourideas the ideas you include depend on the type of message you are sending, the situation & the cultural context.
  • 6.
    4. Collect yourdata be sure to collect enough data to support your ideas; check names, dates, addresses & statistics for precision.
  • 7.
    5. Organize yourmessage organizing your material before writing your first draft can prevent rambling and unclear messages.
  • 8.
    APPROACHES OF MESSAGE COMMUNICATION DIRECT (deductive) APPROACH:  INDIRECT (inductive) APPROACH
  • 9.
    DIRECT APPROACH  Whenyour reader or listener will have a fa vorable or neutral reaction to your messag e, use the direct approach.  Begin with the main idea. After the openin g, include all necessary details and end wi th an appropriate, friendly closing.
  • 10.
    INDIRECT APPROACH  Whenyour reader or listener might rea ct negatively to your message, you sho uld not present the main idea in the first paragraph.  Begin with a buffer, give an explanation and then introduce the main idea.
  • 11.
    BEGINNINGS & ENDINGS: “first impressions are lasting”  “we remember best what we read last”
  • 12.
    BEGINNINGS:  The openingof a message determines w hether the reader continues reading, put s the message aside or discards it. 1. Choose openings appropriate for messa ge purpose and reader. 2. Make the openings considerate, courteo us, concise, clear. 3. Check for completeness.
  • 13.
    ENDINGS:  Closing shouldbe strong, clear & polite, they should leave a sense of closure & g oodwill with the receiver. 1. Make action request clear and complete with 5 W’s and the H. 2. End on a polite, courteous thought. 3. Keep last paragraph concise and correct .
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