The document discusses improving business writing skills. It recommends that business writing be audience-oriented, purposeful, and concise. It outlines the writing process as involving prewriting, writing, and revising stages. It discusses factors to consider when selecting a communication channel, such as importance, feedback needs, cost, and formality. It provides tips for using inclusive, positive, and conversational language to improve tone. Technology can help with tasks like outlining, fact-checking, and designing professional documents.

1. Essentials of Business Communication, Asian Edition
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2. Improving Your
Business Writing
• The best business writing is
• Audience oriented
• Purposeful
• Economical –clear,concise,brief
• To improve your writing skills, you need
• Good teaching materials with excellent model documents
• An effective writing process
• A trainer (like your instructor)
• Practice
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3. The Writing Process
Stage 1: Prewriting Stage 2: Writing Stage 3: Revising
Analyzing Researching Revising
Anticipating Organizing Proofreading
Adapting Composing Evaluating
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4. Factors Determining
Channel Selection
• Importance of message
• Amount and speed of feedback required
• Necessity of a permanent record
• Cost of the channel
• Degree of formality required
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5. Factors Determining
Channel Selection
Possible Channels:
E-mail, fax, letter, memo, report, telephone,
voice mail, meeting, conversation, Web
• What channel is best to announce decreased
insurance benefits for 250 employees?
E-mail or memo
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6. Factors Determining
Channel Selection
• What channel is best for a sales message promoting
a new product to customers?
Letter
• What channel is best for responding to similar
customer inquiries?
Web, letter, telephone
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7. Reader Benefits
Shape your statements to involve the
reader. Strive to develop the “you”
attitude.
Instead of this: Try this:
We are promoting a new You will enjoy total
plan that we believe has peace of mind with our
many outstanding affordable hospitali-
benefits. zation plan that meets all
your needs.
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8. Reader Benefits
Shape your statements to involve the
reader. Strive to develop the “you”
attitude.
Instead of this: Try this:
Before we can allow you You may begin making
to purchase items on this purchases on your new
new account, we must account in two weeks.
wait two weeks to verify
your credit.
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9. Reader Benefits
Shape your statements to involve the
reader. Strive to develop the “you”
attitude.
Instead of this: Try this:
I need your response Your quick response
immediately so that I can means your vacation
make the employee schedules will be ready
vacation schedule by next week.
next week.
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10. Conversational Language
Instead of this: Try this:
The undersigned takes I’m happy to . . . .
pleasure in . . . .
Instead of this: Try this:
It may be of some We’ve credited your
concern to you to learn account for $250.
that your check has been
received and your
account has been
credited for $250.
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11. Positive Language
Instead of this: Try this:
Employees may not use Employees may use the
the First Street entrance Market Street entrance
during remodeling. during remodeling.
Instead of this: Try this:
We cannot fill your order We can fill your order
until we receive an exact once we receive an exact
model number. model number.
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12. Hidden Messages
Some words and phrases convey a
negative and unpleasant tone. They
may imply a hidden message that the
writer does not intend. Think twice
before using the following negative
expressions.
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13. Hidden Messages
Negative Language:
You overlooked
You state that
You failed to
You claim that
You are wrong
You do not understand
Your delay
You forgot to
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14. Inclusive Language
Instead of this: Try this:
Have you called a Have you called a
salesman? salesperson?
Every executive has his All executives have their
own office. own offices.
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15. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create a more
conversational tone and to state your
idea positively.
• The undersigned takes great pleasure in
welcoming you to our staff.
I’m happy to welcome you to our staff.
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16. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create a more
conversational tone and to state your
idea positively.
• We cannot send your order from our
warehouse until June 1.
Your order will be on its way to you June 1.
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17. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create reader
benefits.
• I have 15 different financial plans to offer my
investors.
You have 15 different financial plans from
which to choose.
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18. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence to create reader
benefits.
• We want all newly hired employees to use our
carpooling program for at least three months.
As a newly hired employee, you won’t have to
drive to work for the first three months
because you can carpool.
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19. Plain Language
Avoid federalese, bureaucratese, and inflated
language.
Federalese: Each person to whom the request is herein addressed
is henceforth solicited to submit, or to have his or her department
representative submit, to the Department of Labor official
described above, a comment on whether the proposed plan, in his
or her considered view, meets the requirements of the 2003 law.
Simple Translation: You may wish to comment on whether the
proposed plan meets the requirements of the 2003 law.
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20. Familiar Words
Avoid long, difficult, and unfamiliar words.
Use short, simple, and common words
whenever possible.
Less familiar words: Simple alternatives:
encounter meet
extrapolate project
obligatory required
terminate end
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21. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler
language.
• You may encounter difficulties in terminating
the contract.
You may meet difficulties in ending the
contract.
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22. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler
language.
• As stipulated, we extrapolated the budget
figures for two years.
As required, we projected the budget figures
for two years.
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23. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler
language.
• Will you utilize workbooks during the
obligatory training period?
Will you use workbooks during the required
training period?
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24. Try Your Skill
Revise this sentence using simpler
language.
• We anticipate that a majority of the
alternatives will be fundamental enough to
meet our requirements.
We expect that most of the choices will be
basic enough to meet our needs.
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25. Seven Ways Technology Can
Improve Your Business Writing
• Fighting writer’s block
• Collecting information electronically
• Outlining and organizing ideas
• Improving correctness and precision
• Adding graphics for emphasis
• Designing and producing professional-looking
documents, presentations, and Web pages
• Using collaborative software for team writing
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26. End
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