This document contains feedback from 15 people on a media studies coursework video. The feedback included things people liked about the video, such as the emotional storytelling, effective camera angles and shots, and how well the visuals fit the song. Suggested changes were minor, with a few people noting it could be made clearer that the older couple were the same people as the younger ones. Overall, the feedback was very positive, with the video widely praised for its emotional impact, creative use of techniques like color and editing, and ability to tell a story through visuals and pace.

1. Media Studies Coursework
Evaluation Speed Dating
Name: Matt Holley
One thing you like about this
piece of work
One thing you would change if
you were editing it
Describe the
video in 1
word
Perso
n 1
Very good emotional
communication
Nothing Moving
Perso
n 2
This is amazing, I really like the
story of them running back to be
together and then using a subtle
jump to the future to show they
found their way back together.
Nothing, maybe add a bit more of
Georgia? But I think it’s great how it
is.
Emotive
Perso
n 3
The shots are all really nice,
especially the black and white of
their time together (I like how you
zoomed in on the photo to show
the past), the emotional visuals fit
the song well, well done!!
Add something at the end, like more
shots of the adults together but not
really needed because of the slow
pace of the song
Emotional
Perso
n 4
Some really nice shots that go very
well with the timing of the music.
The quality of the shots are
generally all round great.
Maybe could have used a symbol
which is carried through the younger
and older couple to show they are
the same people to make it clearer.
Moving
Perso
n 5
Amazing use of colour. The variety
of camera angles and shot type to
create emotion is brilliant. Overall
GREAT!
Nothing. Effective
Perso
n 6
Beautiful piece, love the camera
angles and transitions
Try and make it more clear that
they’re the same couple when
they’re older – same as person 4
Beautiful
Perso
n 7
Love the shots with how you follow
Oscar whilst he’s running it really
suits the sing
Used something to show that the
older couple is meant to be them to
make it clearer
Beautiful
Perso
n 8
This was actually insane! Love love
love it! The ending was amazing, it
really worked well with the overall
mood to the video.
Nothing Emotional
Perso
n 9
The use of colour and editing fitted
perfectly with the genre of the song
and the style of music performed
Loved it
Maybe have some tracking shots or
less shaky/handheld footage of them
running
Creative
Perso
n 10
I really liked the use of different
speeds throughout. Also, the bit
where Oscar is with Georgia and
closes his eyes then it cuts to him
alone just opening his eyes is really
effective.
Nothing. Emotional

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Perso
n 11
When the older versions came on I
was like “AHHHH”, very well told
story through great shots that fit
the music perfectly, great pace of
shots and editing
Maybe a shot of the old and young
together
Impactful
Perso
n 12
Contrast between the song and the
footage was really brilliant, love
the way the narrative was
conceptualised
Very little, it was handled very well Delicate
Perso
n 13
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n 14
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n 15
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n 16