This document summarizes feedback from 11 people on a media studies coursework video called "Evaluation Speed Dating". The feedback focused on what each person liked about the video and what they would change if editing it. Overall, most people commented positively on the use of black and white cinematography and felt it set an effective mood. However, some felt certain shots could have been steadier or that the narrative or ending needed more clarity or development.

1. Media Studies Coursework
Evaluation Speed Dating
Name: Lily Curtis
One thing you like about this
piece of work
One thing you would change if
you were editing it
Describe the
video in 1
word
Perso
n 1
The side by side stories of the two
characters is effective to building an
impression of them.
It was a little bit slow in comparison to
the song. Why does Georgia look straight
at the camera at the end?
Sad, but
effective to the
genre
Perso
n 2
Black and white choice works really
well.
I would have increased the editing pace,
including more shots.
Cool
Perso
n 3
really good love the colour! Georgia broke the fourth wall amazing
Perso
n 4
I like the use of black and white,
atmospheric and suits the genre! good
cinematography and appropriate
pacing
a couple shots felt a bit shaky, tripod
could have been used
atmospheric
Perso
n 5
creates mystery on the relationship
between Charlie and Georgia, black and
white is really effective, fits mood of
song
I interpreted it as them planning to meet?
Would of been good if after the shot of
Georgia looking up. Charlie could knock
on the door? Let them meet at the end?
interesting
Perso
n 6
the black and white sets the mood for
the narrative.
I wouldn't have such a sudden ending. slow
Perso
n 7
I like the editing with the use of B & W
as well as the different camera shots.
I would edit the car to fit the beat more. Sick
Perso
n 8
great use of the black and white, gives
it a great effect, loved the song as well.
Some good slow motion shots, overall
really good.
Think I could still here some swearing and
Georgia did look at the camera but it was
still really good.
Amazing
Perso
n 9
shot well and mood of the visuals fit
the tone of the song
more footage needed to make the
narrative make sense, have they broken
up? better ending needed
emotive
Perso
n 10
the storyline and editing was good I don't quite understand why Georgia
looks at the camera at the end? think I
would remove that if it was my video.
deep
Perso
n 11
great shots, they look really smooth
together, very slow and calming as well
which suits the chilled vibe to the song but
really I liked your black and white look of
the video, shows conventions of r & b
videos
sweet