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Media Studies Coursework
Evaluation Speed Dating
Name: Lily Curtis
One thing you like about this
piece of work
One thing you would change if
you were editing it
Describe the
video in 1
word
Perso
n 1
The side by side stories of the two
characters is effective to building an
impression of them.
It was a little bit slow in comparison to
the song. Why does Georgia look straight
at the camera at the end?
Sad, but
effective to the
genre
Perso
n 2
Black and white choice works really
well.
I would have increased the editing pace,
including more shots.
Cool
Perso
n 3
really good love the colour! Georgia broke the fourth wall amazing
Perso
n 4
I like the use of black and white,
atmospheric and suits the genre! good
cinematography and appropriate
pacing
a couple shots felt a bit shaky, tripod
could have been used
atmospheric
Perso
n 5
creates mystery on the relationship
between Charlie and Georgia, black and
white is really effective, fits mood of
song
I interpreted it as them planning to meet?
Would of been good if after the shot of
Georgia looking up. Charlie could knock
on the door? Let them meet at the end?
interesting
Perso
n 6
the black and white sets the mood for
the narrative.
I wouldn't have such a sudden ending. slow
Perso
n 7
I like the editing with the use of B & W
as well as the different camera shots.
I would edit the car to fit the beat more. Sick
Perso
n 8
great use of the black and white, gives
it a great effect, loved the song as well.
Some good slow motion shots, overall
really good.
Think I could still here some swearing and
Georgia did look at the camera but it was
still really good.
Amazing
Perso
n 9
shot well and mood of the visuals fit
the tone of the song
more footage needed to make the
narrative make sense, have they broken
up? better ending needed
emotive
Perso
n 10
the storyline and editing was good I don't quite understand why Georgia
looks at the camera at the end? think I
would remove that if it was my video.
deep
Perso
n 11
great shots, they look really smooth
together, very slow and calming as well
which suits the chilled vibe to the song but
really I liked your black and white look of
the video, shows conventions of r & b
videos
sweet
Here is some feedback from my classmates after watching my final music video. This really
helps to give me ideas of how the overall piece is and what i could improve etc. Reading
Media Studies Coursework
through the comments that have been well i can see the people enjoyed the editing for
example, having it in black and white and slow motion as it helped to create effect and helps
with the mood. The visuals also do this and the story line they found good as it created
mystery between the relationships of the characters. However, things to improve was why
my female actress broke the fourth wall, they thought this was a mistake, but in fact I
wanted it to happen in the video to create suspense.
I also created a Google Form to help create and get even more feedback for myself and sent
it out to all year 13's at Ringwood School. By doing this it then helps to give me more
variation within my responses and again helps to have more opinions. Looking at the form,
with question one i can see people agreed that it fitted well with my chosen genre. Question
2 asked if it the video fitted with the song and lyrics, which again people agreed with.
Similarly they also agreed that the editing went well. When asking about what the liked
about the video, i would say it was mainly editing, they liked the black and white effect. A
few improvements were made which was focusing with the camera shots and the ending of
my film. This is useful as it helps me to know what to improve next. But overall it was clear
to see that my video got positive responses from the form.
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1xzNQdv15p9k5yVYxyUQ9T_KPJQyf-
hsfHGMB5VXADSs/edit
Media Studies Coursework
To conclude, from reading through comments from both software’s and examples, I can see
that my strengths were my editing, people liked the black and white effect and felt it went
well. Some shots were thought to be a bit shaky to, so using a tripod will really help my shots
to be sharp and clear next time. I also think if I had enough time I could of got both
characters to meet in the end, initially this is what I wanted to happen but due to the actors
being available at different times I couldn't do this, but I tried other techniques to try and
make it fit the original story as much as possible. So this is what I know to improve if I was
too do this again

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Question 3

  • 1. Media Studies Coursework Evaluation Speed Dating Name: Lily Curtis One thing you like about this piece of work One thing you would change if you were editing it Describe the video in 1 word Perso n 1 The side by side stories of the two characters is effective to building an impression of them. It was a little bit slow in comparison to the song. Why does Georgia look straight at the camera at the end? Sad, but effective to the genre Perso n 2 Black and white choice works really well. I would have increased the editing pace, including more shots. Cool Perso n 3 really good love the colour! Georgia broke the fourth wall amazing Perso n 4 I like the use of black and white, atmospheric and suits the genre! good cinematography and appropriate pacing a couple shots felt a bit shaky, tripod could have been used atmospheric Perso n 5 creates mystery on the relationship between Charlie and Georgia, black and white is really effective, fits mood of song I interpreted it as them planning to meet? Would of been good if after the shot of Georgia looking up. Charlie could knock on the door? Let them meet at the end? interesting Perso n 6 the black and white sets the mood for the narrative. I wouldn't have such a sudden ending. slow Perso n 7 I like the editing with the use of B & W as well as the different camera shots. I would edit the car to fit the beat more. Sick Perso n 8 great use of the black and white, gives it a great effect, loved the song as well. Some good slow motion shots, overall really good. Think I could still here some swearing and Georgia did look at the camera but it was still really good. Amazing Perso n 9 shot well and mood of the visuals fit the tone of the song more footage needed to make the narrative make sense, have they broken up? better ending needed emotive Perso n 10 the storyline and editing was good I don't quite understand why Georgia looks at the camera at the end? think I would remove that if it was my video. deep Perso n 11 great shots, they look really smooth together, very slow and calming as well which suits the chilled vibe to the song but really I liked your black and white look of the video, shows conventions of r & b videos sweet Here is some feedback from my classmates after watching my final music video. This really helps to give me ideas of how the overall piece is and what i could improve etc. Reading
  • 2. Media Studies Coursework through the comments that have been well i can see the people enjoyed the editing for example, having it in black and white and slow motion as it helped to create effect and helps with the mood. The visuals also do this and the story line they found good as it created mystery between the relationships of the characters. However, things to improve was why my female actress broke the fourth wall, they thought this was a mistake, but in fact I wanted it to happen in the video to create suspense. I also created a Google Form to help create and get even more feedback for myself and sent it out to all year 13's at Ringwood School. By doing this it then helps to give me more variation within my responses and again helps to have more opinions. Looking at the form, with question one i can see people agreed that it fitted well with my chosen genre. Question 2 asked if it the video fitted with the song and lyrics, which again people agreed with. Similarly they also agreed that the editing went well. When asking about what the liked about the video, i would say it was mainly editing, they liked the black and white effect. A few improvements were made which was focusing with the camera shots and the ending of my film. This is useful as it helps me to know what to improve next. But overall it was clear to see that my video got positive responses from the form. https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1xzNQdv15p9k5yVYxyUQ9T_KPJQyf- hsfHGMB5VXADSs/edit
  • 3. Media Studies Coursework To conclude, from reading through comments from both software’s and examples, I can see that my strengths were my editing, people liked the black and white effect and felt it went well. Some shots were thought to be a bit shaky to, so using a tripod will really help my shots to be sharp and clear next time. I also think if I had enough time I could of got both characters to meet in the end, initially this is what I wanted to happen but due to the actors being available at different times I couldn't do this, but I tried other techniques to try and make it fit the original story as much as possible. So this is what I know to improve if I was too do this again