2. Barcode too
big, makes it
Background look more
was changed to important
grey, but when it
cutting model doesn’t need
from photo and to be.
putting on
plain
background.
Makes model
look stark on
page.
Anchorage
covers too
much of
model’s body. It
doesn’t stand
out enough.

3. White outline
Changed
around title
cover image,
makes it look
it is better
pixelated and
quality and
unprofession
now in
al.
proportion to
other factors
on page.
Anchorage is
now more
prominent
on page, its
bigger and
now less
things are
red so it
stands out
more.

4. Added more
Filled in white
text, to tell
line around
reader what
title, stops it
Trey is
from looking
about.
pixelated.
Added date as
this is a
convention of
magazines.
Swapped
round two
texts at the
bottom for
better view.

5. Sections to make
the readers Anchorage
preference easy isn’t big
to find enough.
Big gap on page
Cannot see makes it look
grey text empty.
because of the
background.
Doesn’t stand
out enough
for the reader.
Model looks
squashed as half
of body is cut
out.

6. I have added I have move
much more model into
text which the page, as
fills the before half
page. was cut out.
It doesn’t
look as bare
as before.
I have added
a picture of a
second artist.

7. No where near enough text for an interview, because I ran
out of space. No line for
where the
page
folds.
Whole page
isn’t wide
enough for a
double page
spread.
Gap needs to be
filled.

8. Got around the fold by
Made ‘exclusive’ red so it stands out and
using two replica’s of
makes the reader feel like its a good buy
model for special effect.
because it is exclusive to VOID magazine.
Added in two
quotes to catch
reader’s eye
and make them
want to read
entire
interview.
Added in plenty
more text,
which makes
the page look
for full.