Nicole provided feedback on a table of contents draft, praising the eye-catching title font and interesting pictures but suggesting improvements. Specifically, Nicole recommended using only two fonts to make the page less busy and choosing a more readable font, as well as spacing out the text more for clarity. The document maker then described updating the table of contents by increasing spacing between lines and sections, changing fonts, making page numbers bigger and bolder, and adjusting picture and text positioning for alignment and fit.