Sophie Wrixon received an overall grade of B for her A2 coursework. Her planning was excellent with all work completed and additional materials submitted. Her main construction task of creating a music video showed proficiency in technical skills like editing, lip syncing, and camera work. She constructed her additional tasks of a digipak and poster proficiently following genre conventions. Her evaluation answered all questions excellently using a variety of technologies to demonstrate points and refer to Goodwin's theory, drawing on real world examples and class feedback.

1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: Sophie Wrixon
Planning – comments and mark out of 16/20
All work has been completed and uploaded. Good additional work with permission
slips. Excellent work applying Goodwin to a music video (some spelling errors in this
post). Additional music video analysis is detailed. Overall excellent planning.
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 27/40
The candidate has shown proficiency in the in the creative use of most of the
technical skills. Editing matching the beat of the song well and lip syncing is clear.
Controlled use of the camera with some attention to framing. Mise en scene and
performance follow genre conventions proficiently.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 7/10
Digipak has been constructed as an album proficiently. Good use of conventions in
terms of logos, copyright etc. Good choice of texts and colours to match the genre
and artist. Good addition of step by step showing how the digipak was created.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 7/10
Poster has been constructed to match the album. A well framed and edited
photograph. There is basic awareness to conventions and layouts. More focus on
the font colour to make the artist stand out is needed.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 16/20
Question 1 – answered excellently using powerpoint and slideshare.Choices
explained well throughout. Good references to real world examples in both music
videos and film, and to Goodwin’s theory.
Question 2 – answered excellently using a youtube video. Excellent use of examples
to demonstrate each point as well as referring to Goodwin’s theory.
Question 3 – answered excellently using wordle and slideshare. Good use of class
feedback and questionnaires to gauge audience response.
Question 4 – answered excellently using prezi and a collage of technologies. All
areas covered well.
Overall an excellently answered evaluation using a range of technologies.
Total 73/100 Level: 3 Grade: B