Writing headlines
For newspapers, websites,
and blog posts
The goals and challenges to good
headline writing
• What are the primary goals of
headline writing?
• What are some of the challenges?
Keep it simple
• Use the active voice when possible: As with any
good writing, good headlines are driven by
strong, colorful, precise verbs
• That means avoiding forms of the verb “to be”
• BAD: Sanitation workers are out of a job
• STILL BAD: Sanitation workers canned
BETTER: Sanitation workers lose jobs
Sanitation workers get pink slips
Capitalize first word only
• Although not a complete sentence, treat a headline
like a sentence by capitalizing the first word only,
along with any proper nouns.
• Use a colon to eliminate “says.” Capitalize first word
after the colon.
• Use a semicolon to separate two thoughts of equal
weight.
Lincoln: War inevitable; victory essential
Numbers rule
• Associated Press (AP) style dictates spelling
out numbers below 10. In headlines, however,
you can break this rule.
• 3 die in plane crash
• 2 million fall victim to identity theft each year
Fit the space
• Fill each line of the head within two units of
the letter x in lower case. Do not have one line
of a multi-line head shorter than the rest.
• Do not center headlines
• BAD BETTER
• Lincoln-Douglas debate Lincoln, Douglas
at KU’s Dole Center xxx to debate today
at Dole Centerxx
Avoid split ends
• For headlines of more than one line, keep subjects and
verbs together
• Do not split infinitives over two lines
• BAD: Kerry knocks tax plan because
• capital gains loophole too big
• BETTER: Kerry opposes tax plan;
cites ‘too big’ loophole
• BAD: Governor wants to
• limit sales tax
• BETTER: Governor seeks
• sales tax limits
•
Some examples
Some good headlines
http://web.ku.edu/~edit/headgood.html
Problem Headlines
http://web.ku.edu/~edit/headproblem.html
Examples courtesy of http://web.ku.edu
A headline writing exercise
• Let’s share results and see what the real
editors decided to write
• http://highered.mheducation.com/sites/0073
511994/student_view0/brush_up/part_v-
journalistic_practice2/journalistic_practice_02
.html
Click Bait
• The goals of a website headline are mainly the same as that of a
newspaper headline:
1. To grab the reader’s attention
2. To tell the reader what the story is about
• Often, however, website headlines are designed to entice the reader to
click on a link.
Thus the term “click bait”
https://www.quicksprout.com/2014/07/03/the-formula-
for-a-perfect-headline/?display=wide
Should you “bait” the reader?
PROS:
CONS:

Writing headlines

  • 1.
    Writing headlines For newspapers,websites, and blog posts
  • 2.
    The goals andchallenges to good headline writing • What are the primary goals of headline writing? • What are some of the challenges?
  • 3.
    Keep it simple •Use the active voice when possible: As with any good writing, good headlines are driven by strong, colorful, precise verbs • That means avoiding forms of the verb “to be” • BAD: Sanitation workers are out of a job • STILL BAD: Sanitation workers canned BETTER: Sanitation workers lose jobs Sanitation workers get pink slips
  • 4.
    Capitalize first wordonly • Although not a complete sentence, treat a headline like a sentence by capitalizing the first word only, along with any proper nouns. • Use a colon to eliminate “says.” Capitalize first word after the colon. • Use a semicolon to separate two thoughts of equal weight. Lincoln: War inevitable; victory essential
  • 5.
    Numbers rule • AssociatedPress (AP) style dictates spelling out numbers below 10. In headlines, however, you can break this rule. • 3 die in plane crash • 2 million fall victim to identity theft each year
  • 6.
    Fit the space •Fill each line of the head within two units of the letter x in lower case. Do not have one line of a multi-line head shorter than the rest. • Do not center headlines • BAD BETTER • Lincoln-Douglas debate Lincoln, Douglas at KU’s Dole Center xxx to debate today at Dole Centerxx
  • 7.
    Avoid split ends •For headlines of more than one line, keep subjects and verbs together • Do not split infinitives over two lines • BAD: Kerry knocks tax plan because • capital gains loophole too big • BETTER: Kerry opposes tax plan; cites ‘too big’ loophole • BAD: Governor wants to • limit sales tax • BETTER: Governor seeks • sales tax limits •
  • 8.
    Some examples Some goodheadlines http://web.ku.edu/~edit/headgood.html Problem Headlines http://web.ku.edu/~edit/headproblem.html Examples courtesy of http://web.ku.edu
  • 9.
    A headline writingexercise • Let’s share results and see what the real editors decided to write • http://highered.mheducation.com/sites/0073 511994/student_view0/brush_up/part_v- journalistic_practice2/journalistic_practice_02 .html
  • 10.
    Click Bait • Thegoals of a website headline are mainly the same as that of a newspaper headline: 1. To grab the reader’s attention 2. To tell the reader what the story is about • Often, however, website headlines are designed to entice the reader to click on a link. Thus the term “click bait” https://www.quicksprout.com/2014/07/03/the-formula- for-a-perfect-headline/?display=wide
  • 11.
    Should you “bait”the reader? PROS: CONS: