HEADLINE WRITING
Just a little warm-up
 Think about a news event in your school.
 Then write the headline for such event, on a
piece of paper.
 Note: Write the headline exactly how it will
look in the school paper
Writing Headlines
Once you have your story written, it is time
to create a headline.
 Well-written headlines
 grab the reader's attention
 convey clear, concise thoughts
 Poorly written headlines
 mislead
 and confuse a reader
Headline / head
The headline or head
is the title of a news
story. While the lead
summarizes the story,
the headline
summarizes the lead.
The headline of the
biggest or Number
One story on page 1 of
the newspaper is called
a banner head.
Functions of
Headlines
•To tell in capsule
form what the story
is all about
•To grade the news
as to importance
•To make the page
look attractive
Umbrella
headline
Banner
head,
Streamer
4-line,
1-column
head
2-line,
4-column
head
3-column
crossline
Heads
are
flushed
left
like
this
Kicker
Headline Type Size
Headlines are measured by points. A point is
1/72 of an inch high. Thus, a 36-point head is ½
inch high. The body type is usually 8-point or 9-
point.
Heads vary in width and number of lines as well
as in type size. A headline may vary from one to six
columns wide.
 The editor uses shorthand and asks for 3-36-2.
The first digit specifies the width ( 3 columns), the
second, size ( 36 points) and the third the number of
lines ( 2 lines) . So what is a 6-84-1 headline?
Oil price drops(72 pts)
Dengue cases rise
by 43% --health chief (54 pts)
Pagpapaliban
sa ARMM polls
ok kay GMA (36 pts)
Apply the following rules when
writing headlines
 The best way to write a good headline is
to keep it simple and direct.
 Be clever only when being clever is
called for. Puns are good, but only on
“punny” stories.
 No train
 in DSPC
 No gain
 in RSPC
Here are some tips you can use
 Read the story. Read through the whole
thing before you try to write a headline.
 Think about why the story is important
and why you want to have it published.
That's the idea you want to get across in
your headline.
 Take two key words from the story -
nouns and verb that represent the main
idea in the story, especially the main
action or result.
Take two key words from the story – nouns
and verb that represent the main idea in the
story, especially the main action or result.
 Try on words. Think about the main words
that pertain to the story. Think about the way
they sound. Then think about words that
sound good with those words.
Try giving this lead a headline:
 MANILA, Philippines - If Philippine athletes
are bound for China for this year for the
Beijing Olympics, Filipino cyber athletes are
also now preparing for the biggest game of
their lives as they compete in the World
Cyber Games (WCG) competition to be held
in Cologne, Germany this November.
Here are some tips you can use
 Use strong verbs that deliver a punch and
always write the headline in the active
voice.
 Do not use unnecessary words such as
verbs be (is, are) or articles such as a, an
or the.
 For a news story, your headline should
summarize what is most newsy about
your story. With an editorial,
entertainment or sports story, there's
more room for humor or clever words
but you will still want to convey the main
point of your story.
Write a two-column, 2-line head
 MANILA, Philippines - If Philippine
athletes are bound for China for this
year for the Beijing Olympics, Filipino
cyber athletes are also now preparing
for the biggest game of their lives as
they compete in the World Cyber
Games (WCG) competition to be held in
Cologne, Germany this November.
RP cyber athletes bound
for world games in Germany
 MANILA, Philippines - If Philippine
athletes are bound for China for
this year for the Beijing Olympics,
Filipino cyber athletes are also
now preparing for the biggest
game of their lives as they
compete in the World Cyber
Games (WCG) competition to be
held in Cologne, Germany this
November.
Write a two-column, two-line head
 The Catholic Church has denied the
sacrament of marriage to a Quezon City
councilor because of his stance
advocating birth control.
 Iloilo Rep. Janette Garin told reporters
yesterday the Church denied Councilor
Joseph Juico’s request to be married in
church “just because he was the author
of the reproductive health measure in
the city.”
 By Delon Porcalla
Thursday, July 17, 2008
Pro-birth control councilor denied
marriage rites
Is this head all right?
 The Catholic Church has denied the
sacrament of marriage to a Quezon
City councilor because of his stance
advocating birth control.
 Pro-birth control councilor
denied marriage rites
Headline Checklist
Does the headline express the main idea of the
story?
Does the headline effectively label the story's
content?
Will it create reader interest?
Will it move readers into the story?
Does the headline focus match the lead focus?
Are the words short, common, powerful,
specific?
Would you read a story with this headline?
Do’s in Writing Traditional
Heads
 Make the head
answer as many W’s
as possible
 Scribes win in
Presscon (?)
 Gulayan sa Paaralan,
sinuportahan (?)
 Scribes place 2nd
overall in EDDIS
Press Conference
 Gulayan sa Paaralan,
sinuportahan ng PTCA
Do’s in Writing Traditional
Heads
 Write numbers in
figures or spell them
out
 Eighty percent
of del Pilarians
approve CyberEd (x)
 80% of del Pilarians
approve CyberEd
 9 golds up for
grabs in Division
Athletic Meet (x)
 Nine golds up
for grabs in Division
Athletic Meet
Do’s in Writing Traditional
Heads
 Positive heads are
preferable to
negative ones.
 Hog cholera not
in Bulacan (x)
 ARMM polls,
hindi tuloy
 Bulacan gov’t allays
hog cholera fear
 ARMM polls,
ipinagpaliban
Do’s in Writing Traditional
Heads
 Be specific.
 Put a verb
expressed or
implied.
 The Seminar on
English proficiency
(x)
 Mentors join
seminar on English
proficiency (improve)
 Mentors join seminar
on English proficiency
 English Olympics
up in October
Do’s in Writing Traditional
Heads
 Omit articles ( a, an the).
 Do not use all caps. The
trend is down style
( lower case except for
first word and proper
nouns) and flush left
 THE ENROLMENT
DIPS (x)
 Dela Cruz, Reyes
Vie for Top Honors (x)
 Dela Cruz, Reyes
vie for Top Honors
 Enrolment dips
by 2.5 %
Do’s in Writing Traditional Heads
 The active verb is
preferable than the
passive, but when the
doer is not prominent,
use the passive head .
 Student officials
inducted en masse
 Gov Jonjon inducts
student officials
Do’s in Writing Traditional Heads
 Use the present tense
for past stories; the
infinitive for future
stories.
 Be consistent in font
type & style: up style
/down style
 Scribes, mentors
join press confab
 PTCA to donate
computer units
Don’t’s in Headline Writing
 Avoid label, wooden
and mandatory heads.
 Avoid editorializing .
 Journalism training (X)
 Join Journalism training(X)
 SPAs perk up skills
in division training
 Kind Principal bats for
moral values (X)
 SPA training, a success (X)
Don’t’s in Headline Writing
 Don’t end a line with a
preposition, but don’t
confuse a hanging prep.
with a two-word verb.
 Principal bats for
moral values
 Studes vote for
female prexy (X)
 Studes elect
female prexy
Don’t’s in Headline Writing
 Don’t break off
words, verb
phrase, preposition
and object
 School Choir to per-
form in NAMCYA in
Nov. (x)
 Choir to perform
in NAMCYA
in November
Don’t’s in Headline Writing
 Don’t abbreviate
months/ days
unless figures
follow.
 SG election slated
in October
 SG election slated
on October 31
Punctuating Headlines
 Use a comma in
place of the
conjunction and.
 In a two-line head,
separate two
independent clauses
with a semi-colon
(;)
DepED, Intel launch
e-learning site in HS
Math, Science
Graft raps filed vs GSIS;
Palace defends Garcia
noun verb
Graft raps filed vs GSIS;
Palace defends Garcia
noun verb
Punctuating Headlines
 Use the single
quotation
marks.Use comma
or dash in direct
quotes.
 Don’t use periods in
acronyms.
 ‘I am sorry,’ says
GMA
 GMA says, ‘I am
sorry’
 I am sorry – GMA
 GMA: I am sorry
Vocabulary Headline
What do the words in bold mean?
 Farmers group scores
gov’t on
unemployment
 Director Ramirez
keynotes Reg’l
Journalism confab
 Transport groups
buck high oil price
hike
 Literary contests cap
Buwan ng Wika
 Scribes in libel row
Vocabulary Headline
Replace the italicized words
with apt head lingo
 Campaign against pornographic
literature going on
 Drive vs smut on
 Math winners announced
 Math winners bared
Vocabulary Headline
Replace the italicized words
with apt head lingo
 Campus writers will join
regional journalism conference
 Scribes to join
reg’l presscon
Vocabulary Headline
Replace the italicized words
with apt head lingo
 Principal approves
Student Govt election
 Principal okays
Student Gov’t polls
Vocabulary Headline
Replace the italicized words
with apt head lingo
 First year student wins first place
in poster making contest
 Freshman cops gold
in poster making tilt
Pagsulat ng Ulo ng Balita
Ano ang mali sa ss. na ulo ng balita? Iwasto.
 Mag-aaral, kahanga-hangang nagwagi
 REG’L SCHOOLS PRESSCON
Editor ng Malaya, nanguna sa pagsulat ng balita
 Ang New Secondary Curriclum, hindi matutuloy
 New Secondary Curriclum, ipinagpaliban
Pagsulat ng Ulo ng Balita
Ano ang mali sa ss. na ulo ng balita? Iwasto.
 CA, ang Panauhing pandangal sa
paglulunsad ng“Clean-and-Green”
 Dating Pangulong Aquino, panauhing pandangal
sa paglulunsad ng ‘Clean-and-Green’
 Aklasan sa DAR, nalutas nagsipag-aklas, bumalik
 Aklasan sa DAR, nalutas; manggagawa, bumalik
Exercise:
 3-column, 2-line quote head
 MANILA, Philippines -- Campus journalists
challenged Vice President Noli de Castro to
take a stand against the extrajudicial killings of
journalists and to protect press freedom, saying
his “missionary words fall short of his stance
on concrete issues affecting the state of
Philippine media.”
 July 15, 2008 18:27:00
 Abigail Kwok
 INQUIRER.net
Exercise:
Campus press to De Castro:
Take stand on state of RP media
 MANILA, Philippines -- Campus
journalists challenged Vice President
Noli de Castro to take a stand against the
extrajudicial killings of journalists and to
protect press freedom, saying his
“missionary words fall short of his stance
on concrete issues affecting the state of
Philippine media.”
Always read broadsheet dailies
to keep up with the trends in
headline writing and newspapering.
 Thank you.

Headline Writing.ppt

  • 1.
  • 2.
    Just a littlewarm-up  Think about a news event in your school.  Then write the headline for such event, on a piece of paper.  Note: Write the headline exactly how it will look in the school paper
  • 3.
    Writing Headlines Once youhave your story written, it is time to create a headline.  Well-written headlines  grab the reader's attention  convey clear, concise thoughts  Poorly written headlines  mislead  and confuse a reader
  • 4.
    Headline / head Theheadline or head is the title of a news story. While the lead summarizes the story, the headline summarizes the lead. The headline of the biggest or Number One story on page 1 of the newspaper is called a banner head.
  • 5.
    Functions of Headlines •To tellin capsule form what the story is all about •To grade the news as to importance •To make the page look attractive
  • 6.
  • 7.
  • 8.
  • 9.
  • 10.
    Headline Type Size Headlinesare measured by points. A point is 1/72 of an inch high. Thus, a 36-point head is ½ inch high. The body type is usually 8-point or 9- point. Heads vary in width and number of lines as well as in type size. A headline may vary from one to six columns wide.  The editor uses shorthand and asks for 3-36-2. The first digit specifies the width ( 3 columns), the second, size ( 36 points) and the third the number of lines ( 2 lines) . So what is a 6-84-1 headline?
  • 11.
    Oil price drops(72pts) Dengue cases rise by 43% --health chief (54 pts) Pagpapaliban sa ARMM polls ok kay GMA (36 pts)
  • 12.
    Apply the followingrules when writing headlines  The best way to write a good headline is to keep it simple and direct.  Be clever only when being clever is called for. Puns are good, but only on “punny” stories.  No train  in DSPC  No gain  in RSPC
  • 13.
    Here are sometips you can use  Read the story. Read through the whole thing before you try to write a headline.  Think about why the story is important and why you want to have it published. That's the idea you want to get across in your headline.  Take two key words from the story - nouns and verb that represent the main idea in the story, especially the main action or result.
  • 14.
    Take two keywords from the story – nouns and verb that represent the main idea in the story, especially the main action or result.  Try on words. Think about the main words that pertain to the story. Think about the way they sound. Then think about words that sound good with those words. Try giving this lead a headline:  MANILA, Philippines - If Philippine athletes are bound for China for this year for the Beijing Olympics, Filipino cyber athletes are also now preparing for the biggest game of their lives as they compete in the World Cyber Games (WCG) competition to be held in Cologne, Germany this November.
  • 15.
    Here are sometips you can use  Use strong verbs that deliver a punch and always write the headline in the active voice.  Do not use unnecessary words such as verbs be (is, are) or articles such as a, an or the.  For a news story, your headline should summarize what is most newsy about your story. With an editorial, entertainment or sports story, there's more room for humor or clever words but you will still want to convey the main point of your story.
  • 16.
    Write a two-column,2-line head  MANILA, Philippines - If Philippine athletes are bound for China for this year for the Beijing Olympics, Filipino cyber athletes are also now preparing for the biggest game of their lives as they compete in the World Cyber Games (WCG) competition to be held in Cologne, Germany this November.
  • 17.
    RP cyber athletesbound for world games in Germany  MANILA, Philippines - If Philippine athletes are bound for China for this year for the Beijing Olympics, Filipino cyber athletes are also now preparing for the biggest game of their lives as they compete in the World Cyber Games (WCG) competition to be held in Cologne, Germany this November.
  • 18.
    Write a two-column,two-line head  The Catholic Church has denied the sacrament of marriage to a Quezon City councilor because of his stance advocating birth control.  Iloilo Rep. Janette Garin told reporters yesterday the Church denied Councilor Joseph Juico’s request to be married in church “just because he was the author of the reproductive health measure in the city.”  By Delon Porcalla Thursday, July 17, 2008
  • 19.
    Pro-birth control councilordenied marriage rites Is this head all right?  The Catholic Church has denied the sacrament of marriage to a Quezon City councilor because of his stance advocating birth control.  Pro-birth control councilor denied marriage rites
  • 20.
    Headline Checklist Does theheadline express the main idea of the story? Does the headline effectively label the story's content? Will it create reader interest? Will it move readers into the story? Does the headline focus match the lead focus? Are the words short, common, powerful, specific? Would you read a story with this headline?
  • 21.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  Make the head answer as many W’s as possible  Scribes win in Presscon (?)  Gulayan sa Paaralan, sinuportahan (?)  Scribes place 2nd overall in EDDIS Press Conference  Gulayan sa Paaralan, sinuportahan ng PTCA
  • 22.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  Write numbers in figures or spell them out  Eighty percent of del Pilarians approve CyberEd (x)  80% of del Pilarians approve CyberEd  9 golds up for grabs in Division Athletic Meet (x)  Nine golds up for grabs in Division Athletic Meet
  • 23.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  Positive heads are preferable to negative ones.  Hog cholera not in Bulacan (x)  ARMM polls, hindi tuloy  Bulacan gov’t allays hog cholera fear  ARMM polls, ipinagpaliban
  • 24.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  Be specific.  Put a verb expressed or implied.  The Seminar on English proficiency (x)  Mentors join seminar on English proficiency (improve)  Mentors join seminar on English proficiency  English Olympics up in October
  • 25.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  Omit articles ( a, an the).  Do not use all caps. The trend is down style ( lower case except for first word and proper nouns) and flush left  THE ENROLMENT DIPS (x)  Dela Cruz, Reyes Vie for Top Honors (x)  Dela Cruz, Reyes vie for Top Honors  Enrolment dips by 2.5 %
  • 26.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  The active verb is preferable than the passive, but when the doer is not prominent, use the passive head .  Student officials inducted en masse  Gov Jonjon inducts student officials
  • 27.
    Do’s in WritingTraditional Heads  Use the present tense for past stories; the infinitive for future stories.  Be consistent in font type & style: up style /down style  Scribes, mentors join press confab  PTCA to donate computer units
  • 28.
    Don’t’s in HeadlineWriting  Avoid label, wooden and mandatory heads.  Avoid editorializing .  Journalism training (X)  Join Journalism training(X)  SPAs perk up skills in division training  Kind Principal bats for moral values (X)  SPA training, a success (X)
  • 29.
    Don’t’s in HeadlineWriting  Don’t end a line with a preposition, but don’t confuse a hanging prep. with a two-word verb.  Principal bats for moral values  Studes vote for female prexy (X)  Studes elect female prexy
  • 30.
    Don’t’s in HeadlineWriting  Don’t break off words, verb phrase, preposition and object  School Choir to per- form in NAMCYA in Nov. (x)  Choir to perform in NAMCYA in November
  • 31.
    Don’t’s in HeadlineWriting  Don’t abbreviate months/ days unless figures follow.  SG election slated in October  SG election slated on October 31
  • 32.
    Punctuating Headlines  Usea comma in place of the conjunction and.  In a two-line head, separate two independent clauses with a semi-colon (;) DepED, Intel launch e-learning site in HS Math, Science Graft raps filed vs GSIS; Palace defends Garcia noun verb Graft raps filed vs GSIS; Palace defends Garcia noun verb
  • 33.
    Punctuating Headlines  Usethe single quotation marks.Use comma or dash in direct quotes.  Don’t use periods in acronyms.  ‘I am sorry,’ says GMA  GMA says, ‘I am sorry’  I am sorry – GMA  GMA: I am sorry
  • 34.
    Vocabulary Headline What dothe words in bold mean?  Farmers group scores gov’t on unemployment  Director Ramirez keynotes Reg’l Journalism confab  Transport groups buck high oil price hike  Literary contests cap Buwan ng Wika  Scribes in libel row
  • 35.
    Vocabulary Headline Replace theitalicized words with apt head lingo  Campaign against pornographic literature going on  Drive vs smut on  Math winners announced  Math winners bared
  • 36.
    Vocabulary Headline Replace theitalicized words with apt head lingo  Campus writers will join regional journalism conference  Scribes to join reg’l presscon
  • 37.
    Vocabulary Headline Replace theitalicized words with apt head lingo  Principal approves Student Govt election  Principal okays Student Gov’t polls
  • 38.
    Vocabulary Headline Replace theitalicized words with apt head lingo  First year student wins first place in poster making contest  Freshman cops gold in poster making tilt
  • 39.
    Pagsulat ng Ulong Balita Ano ang mali sa ss. na ulo ng balita? Iwasto.  Mag-aaral, kahanga-hangang nagwagi  REG’L SCHOOLS PRESSCON Editor ng Malaya, nanguna sa pagsulat ng balita  Ang New Secondary Curriclum, hindi matutuloy  New Secondary Curriclum, ipinagpaliban
  • 40.
    Pagsulat ng Ulong Balita Ano ang mali sa ss. na ulo ng balita? Iwasto.  CA, ang Panauhing pandangal sa paglulunsad ng“Clean-and-Green”  Dating Pangulong Aquino, panauhing pandangal sa paglulunsad ng ‘Clean-and-Green’  Aklasan sa DAR, nalutas nagsipag-aklas, bumalik  Aklasan sa DAR, nalutas; manggagawa, bumalik
  • 41.
    Exercise:  3-column, 2-linequote head  MANILA, Philippines -- Campus journalists challenged Vice President Noli de Castro to take a stand against the extrajudicial killings of journalists and to protect press freedom, saying his “missionary words fall short of his stance on concrete issues affecting the state of Philippine media.”  July 15, 2008 18:27:00  Abigail Kwok  INQUIRER.net
  • 42.
    Exercise: Campus press toDe Castro: Take stand on state of RP media  MANILA, Philippines -- Campus journalists challenged Vice President Noli de Castro to take a stand against the extrajudicial killings of journalists and to protect press freedom, saying his “missionary words fall short of his stance on concrete issues affecting the state of Philippine media.”
  • 43.
    Always read broadsheetdailies to keep up with the trends in headline writing and newspapering.  Thank you.