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Strengths Weaknesses Improvements
Poster  Consistent colours were
used
 Like the background and
the photo used
 Actors names not there
 Billing block too large
 Colourless
 Get rid of apple logo
 Too ‘Matrix-y’
 Green colour scheme for
brand identity

Magazine cover  Like the colour
 Green colour was used
which showed consistency
on the magazine
 Barcode is too high
 Shadow under filmname
isn’t on the poster
 Needs an image
 Make faceless name more
apparent.
 Change the barcode
 Incorporate a photo
 Stick to Empire conventions
Teaser  Good variety of shots
 A large range of locations
 Like the faceless title font
which has brand identity.
 No Sense of characters
 Voiceover hard to
understand
 Ident needs more work
 Appears too much like an
advert
 Lack of storyline
 Text on phone needs to last
longer
 Get rid of the 3D Text effect
at the end
 Improve sound quality
 Music too loud
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Rough cut feedback

  • 1. Strengths Weaknesses Improvements Poster  Consistent colours were used  Like the background and the photo used  Actors names not there  Billing block too large  Colourless  Get rid of apple logo  Too ‘Matrix-y’  Green colour scheme for brand identity  Magazine cover  Like the colour  Green colour was used which showed consistency on the magazine  Barcode is too high  Shadow under filmname isn’t on the poster  Needs an image  Make faceless name more apparent.  Change the barcode  Incorporate a photo  Stick to Empire conventions Teaser  Good variety of shots  A large range of locations  Like the faceless title font which has brand identity.  No Sense of characters  Voiceover hard to understand  Ident needs more work  Appears too much like an advert  Lack of storyline  Text on phone needs to last longer  Get rid of the 3D Text effect at the end  Improve sound quality  Music too loud