The document summarizes feedback received at various stages of a music video project, including initial ideas, lyric analysis, song timeline, draft shooting script, first cut, and final cut. Feedback focused on strengthening narratives, adding visual interest, including more shot details, varying shot lengths to build tension, and ensuring consistent high video and editing quality throughout. The feedback was incorporated into revisions to refine ideas and improve the visual storytelling and artistic quality of the final music video.

1. Question 3
Evaluation

2. Which stages I received feedback on
• Initial ideas
• First cut
• Digipak/magazine advert
• Final cut
• Shooting script/ song timeline

3. Initial ideas
• The audience felt we had three strong ideas and one
member said that 'the narratives fitted well with our song
choices‘
• we went for a very specific target audience which is also
positive because by doing this we know what sort of things
to include in our music video and what to leave out.
• liked the fact that we have 'three separate ideas‘
• we chose the idea for the song 'Crazy' by 'Gnarls Barkley',
we would have a lot more creative freedom because
we could use silhouettes and shadows to portray the
concept that he isn't certain about what or who is chasing
him, therefore reinstating the idea that he is going crazy

4. Lyric analysis
Positives
• Clear themes
• Good link to music, narrative suits tempo of song
• Good detail and depth
Improvements
• State whether you're focusing on money, love or
both
• Make it more visually interesting
• Could add what I would film to show these things

5. Song timeline
• Needed more detail and to look more visually
interesting
• List themes and content in each section
• Include sound, shots and main events

6. Draft shooting script
• Look for more variety of shots
• Interesting use of some shots
• Increase shot length to create tension
• Make sure shot descriptions are thorough

7. First cut
• Good shot variation
• Good camera quality
• Good tracking shots
• Make sure to continue this standard
• Make background darker on shots to make them stand out
• Might be an idea to show shots of players chips building up
• Don’t put too much in first 30 seconds
• Could mimic close up used at start of music video
• Got a good theme with lots of creative choices
• Good timing of shots

8. Final cut
• Good variety of shots and effects
• Nice lowering of saturation
• Haven't used too many transitions or effects
• Good consistency
• Style of editing and narrative suits audience and
genre
• Clear meaning
• Good leaving it on cliff hanger
• Alternate ending

9. Expansion
• Now say when you got feed back
• Why you got it
• What you got feedback
• How you used it