Drew Tomlinson
PRODUCTION
PROCESS
EVALUATION
RESEARCH
Researching films such as ‘Drive’ or ‘Nightcrawler’ that
had the same aesthetic as what I wanted to recreate in
my video. This helped because it gave me more
inspiration and an idea where to go when colour
correcting in post.
I could have improved by digging into the deeper
meaning of the song. Instead I opted to take it at face
value to make visuals for the video easier to come up
with and easier to shoot.
The song itself features in the film Drive and worked
well, so the idea was to try and replicate the same
aesthetic, but taking the story in the song and turning
that into a sort of short film/music video.
I think I could have done more research into filming
techniques when filming on your own as it could have
been useful and given me ideas and techniques to
PLANNING
Planning helped because it provided me with a solid
foundation to build upon.
While not entirely the same (shot to shot), my planning still
gave me the premise and most shots in the video thought of
ahead of time, giving me more time to be creative, always
having the planning to fall back on if anything didn’t go as
intended.
Perhaps I could have included more visual planning to make
the tone come across clearer.
I also could have done more research into locations which
could have saved time when deciding where to film.
Also in the planning I said I’d have help to make it, I didn’t, I
did it all by myself which definitely made it harder and did
limit some shots I could do. If I were to redo it with
somebody helping it’d be a lot easier I think.
TIME MANAGEMENT
I think I could have handled my time better, however if I
had more time I think the video could be a lot better.
Obviously there is plenty of things that could make it
better, but its all about making do with what you have
available and with that criteria I got the job done.
If I had more time to make this I’d definitely film a lot
more footage even if I didn’t use it. The video was always
intended to be short, but giving myself more options in
the edit would have been nice.
Also originally planned to film it with my sister, but the
timing didn’t work out, so plan in advance with her to
find a time when we were both free to shoot footage
because having to do it on my own did limit what footage
I could shoot. Leading me to have to compromise/scrap
shot ideas I had originally.
TECHNICAL QUALITIES -
CAMERA
Blue/Late Night Colour Scheme
Person hidden in darkness/not
shown
Bokeh effect for the lights in the
background.
I tried to replicate the dark/blue colour
scheme in my video using the Day4Nite
colour correction option on premier with
a few small tweaks of my own, I couldn’t
get it perfect, but I like the way this shot
turned out.
TECHNICAL QUALITIES –
EDITING/POST
I tried to use intercutting in my video as it was an efficient
way to get everything across without the story being
necessarily linear.
I slowed down the footage at the start so the ‘bzz’ of the
phone line would sync with the person putting the phone
to their ear, also to create a vibe along with the colours and
lighting that something bad had happened before this
video started, then you start to find out what as the video
goes on.
I also used basic edits like cutting on the beat, between a
black screen and then back to the footage, the reason I did
this was to kind of separate the black and white shots from
the colour shots, besides from when they are swiftly
intercut with one another.
AESTHETIC QUALITIES
I’m quite happy with the way it looks visually considering I shot it all
by myself.
I used a 2:35:1 aspect ratio to give it a more cinematic feel rather
than a full screen music video/tv show feel.
I’m really happy with the way the scenes shot in the studio turned
out with the specific lighting, those scenes were also easier to colour
correct in premier.
The way the blue colour correction turned out I’m happy with, but I
think if I had time to re-edit it, I’d find a way to colour correct all the
scenes the same so I didn’t have to use black and white, although I
do like the difference in colour for the scenes that sort of flashback.
AUDIENCE APPEAL
I didn’t really have a specific target audience in mind
when making it, but I imagine it would appeal to
teenagers/young adults, with the general vibe the video
gives off.
PEER
FEEDBACK
FEEDBACK 1
What did you like about the product?
The blue colour scheme.
The cutting back and forth between footage.
The way you cut to the knife which implies something
bad happened.
What improvements could have been made to the
product?
Could have been longer maybe.
Less use of repetition with some of the footage.
More consistent colour scheme throughout the video.
FEEDBACK 2
What did you like about the product?
Likes the title card and colour of sky.
Likes the swipe of the camera when opening the box.
The use of the blue colours.
What improvements could have been made to the
product?
Consistent colours throughout.
Less repeating of the footage.
PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY
What do you agree with from your peer feedback?
 I agree with the lack of consistent colours throughout although I do
like the black and white I think having one colour scheme would have
been better.
 I also agree with the less repetition improvement
What do you disagree with from your peer feedback?
 That it could have been longer, whether it was long or short wasn’t
really important to me, I’d rather it be shorter and concise rather than
long and bloated.
 I liked the blue colour scheme I went for but I think with more time
I’d probably find a better colour scheme and match it throughout the
entire video.
PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY
I would find a more consistent colour scheme throughout the
entire video.
I’d also try to use less repetitive footage throughout the video.

Music Video Evaluation

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  • 3.
    RESEARCH Researching films suchas ‘Drive’ or ‘Nightcrawler’ that had the same aesthetic as what I wanted to recreate in my video. This helped because it gave me more inspiration and an idea where to go when colour correcting in post. I could have improved by digging into the deeper meaning of the song. Instead I opted to take it at face value to make visuals for the video easier to come up with and easier to shoot. The song itself features in the film Drive and worked well, so the idea was to try and replicate the same aesthetic, but taking the story in the song and turning that into a sort of short film/music video. I think I could have done more research into filming techniques when filming on your own as it could have been useful and given me ideas and techniques to
  • 4.
    PLANNING Planning helped becauseit provided me with a solid foundation to build upon. While not entirely the same (shot to shot), my planning still gave me the premise and most shots in the video thought of ahead of time, giving me more time to be creative, always having the planning to fall back on if anything didn’t go as intended. Perhaps I could have included more visual planning to make the tone come across clearer. I also could have done more research into locations which could have saved time when deciding where to film. Also in the planning I said I’d have help to make it, I didn’t, I did it all by myself which definitely made it harder and did limit some shots I could do. If I were to redo it with somebody helping it’d be a lot easier I think.
  • 5.
    TIME MANAGEMENT I thinkI could have handled my time better, however if I had more time I think the video could be a lot better. Obviously there is plenty of things that could make it better, but its all about making do with what you have available and with that criteria I got the job done. If I had more time to make this I’d definitely film a lot more footage even if I didn’t use it. The video was always intended to be short, but giving myself more options in the edit would have been nice. Also originally planned to film it with my sister, but the timing didn’t work out, so plan in advance with her to find a time when we were both free to shoot footage because having to do it on my own did limit what footage I could shoot. Leading me to have to compromise/scrap shot ideas I had originally.
  • 6.
    TECHNICAL QUALITIES - CAMERA Blue/LateNight Colour Scheme Person hidden in darkness/not shown Bokeh effect for the lights in the background. I tried to replicate the dark/blue colour scheme in my video using the Day4Nite colour correction option on premier with a few small tweaks of my own, I couldn’t get it perfect, but I like the way this shot turned out.
  • 7.
    TECHNICAL QUALITIES – EDITING/POST Itried to use intercutting in my video as it was an efficient way to get everything across without the story being necessarily linear. I slowed down the footage at the start so the ‘bzz’ of the phone line would sync with the person putting the phone to their ear, also to create a vibe along with the colours and lighting that something bad had happened before this video started, then you start to find out what as the video goes on. I also used basic edits like cutting on the beat, between a black screen and then back to the footage, the reason I did this was to kind of separate the black and white shots from the colour shots, besides from when they are swiftly intercut with one another.
  • 8.
    AESTHETIC QUALITIES I’m quitehappy with the way it looks visually considering I shot it all by myself. I used a 2:35:1 aspect ratio to give it a more cinematic feel rather than a full screen music video/tv show feel. I’m really happy with the way the scenes shot in the studio turned out with the specific lighting, those scenes were also easier to colour correct in premier. The way the blue colour correction turned out I’m happy with, but I think if I had time to re-edit it, I’d find a way to colour correct all the scenes the same so I didn’t have to use black and white, although I do like the difference in colour for the scenes that sort of flashback.
  • 9.
    AUDIENCE APPEAL I didn’treally have a specific target audience in mind when making it, but I imagine it would appeal to teenagers/young adults, with the general vibe the video gives off.
  • 10.
  • 11.
    FEEDBACK 1 What didyou like about the product? The blue colour scheme. The cutting back and forth between footage. The way you cut to the knife which implies something bad happened. What improvements could have been made to the product? Could have been longer maybe. Less use of repetition with some of the footage. More consistent colour scheme throughout the video.
  • 12.
    FEEDBACK 2 What didyou like about the product? Likes the title card and colour of sky. Likes the swipe of the camera when opening the box. The use of the blue colours. What improvements could have been made to the product? Consistent colours throughout. Less repeating of the footage.
  • 13.
    PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY Whatdo you agree with from your peer feedback?  I agree with the lack of consistent colours throughout although I do like the black and white I think having one colour scheme would have been better.  I also agree with the less repetition improvement What do you disagree with from your peer feedback?  That it could have been longer, whether it was long or short wasn’t really important to me, I’d rather it be shorter and concise rather than long and bloated.  I liked the blue colour scheme I went for but I think with more time I’d probably find a better colour scheme and match it throughout the entire video.
  • 14.
    PEER FEEDBACK SUMMARY Iwould find a more consistent colour scheme throughout the entire video. I’d also try to use less repetitive footage throughout the video.

Editor's Notes

  • #4 What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  • #5 What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  • #6 Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  • #7 Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  • #8 Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  • #9 Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  • #10 How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  • #15 What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?