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FRONT COVER WEEK 2
After peer feedback from a follow student I was advised to remove the
background from the barcode to make it more professional.
When given peer feedback from a year 13 student, I was advised to make
most fonts the same to make the page flow better. It made my cover look
more realistic and similar of the rap genre.
Furthermore I was advised to move the pull out quote to the left third as it was
less visible in the top right corner. Also I decided to add a skyline of “association
with sbtv” which is a popular channel which shows rap and grime songs therefore
making it more relatable tot the target audience.
I then changed the positioning of the cover lines and changed the colour and
stroke of the text in order to make the centre of visual interest more
dominant.
After this I changed the text under the mast head to make it fit
better and to allow the image to be slight enlarged.
From feedback from the teacher I was recommend to make the anchorage text bigger
as it is important for this to be dominant on this page.
• I then changed the colour of the anchorage text and made the
stoke smaller so it was more dominant.
I added further text of other similar groups of artists to my magazine to
interest the reader more an make it more attractable.
I added more text to the left third of the page, by adding a cover line about
American artists it allows more genre hybridization and shows that it can
appeal to more of a target market.
I added a red line under this text to emphasise the word truth to tell the
customers that this magazine is reliable.
I changed same of the fonts to be the same to make it look more slick.
From feedback from the teacher and in order to make my magazine
like my partners I made the mast head bigger and more dominant as
the same as the other magazine.
I then moved the cover lines down so it was more in proportion
Finally I moved the skyline to the edge and in line to improve the
magazine aesthetically.

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Front cover week 2

  • 2. After peer feedback from a follow student I was advised to remove the background from the barcode to make it more professional.
  • 3. When given peer feedback from a year 13 student, I was advised to make most fonts the same to make the page flow better. It made my cover look more realistic and similar of the rap genre.
  • 4. Furthermore I was advised to move the pull out quote to the left third as it was less visible in the top right corner. Also I decided to add a skyline of “association with sbtv” which is a popular channel which shows rap and grime songs therefore making it more relatable tot the target audience.
  • 5. I then changed the positioning of the cover lines and changed the colour and stroke of the text in order to make the centre of visual interest more dominant.
  • 6. After this I changed the text under the mast head to make it fit better and to allow the image to be slight enlarged.
  • 7. From feedback from the teacher I was recommend to make the anchorage text bigger as it is important for this to be dominant on this page.
  • 8. • I then changed the colour of the anchorage text and made the stoke smaller so it was more dominant.
  • 9. I added further text of other similar groups of artists to my magazine to interest the reader more an make it more attractable.
  • 10. I added more text to the left third of the page, by adding a cover line about American artists it allows more genre hybridization and shows that it can appeal to more of a target market.
  • 11. I added a red line under this text to emphasise the word truth to tell the customers that this magazine is reliable.
  • 12. I changed same of the fonts to be the same to make it look more slick.
  • 13. From feedback from the teacher and in order to make my magazine like my partners I made the mast head bigger and more dominant as the same as the other magazine.
  • 14. I then moved the cover lines down so it was more in proportion
  • 15. Finally I moved the skyline to the edge and in line to improve the magazine aesthetically.