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Firstly, I asked this question as I felt it was important to ask if those who had viewed my pitch actually enjoyed the ideas I had
delivered. All who viewed my pitch were within the target audience I stated so their feedback was important to me to gather
their opinions.
What I found out from this questions was that everyone who had been there to watch me deliver my pitch had enjoyed the ideas
I had shared during it.
Secondly, I then felt it was necessary to ask those who had viewed my pitch if they felt that the ideas I had produced and shared
were actually suitable for the target audience I had shared during the actual pitch. This is important seeing as they are all doing
the same pitch as myself, so they have an incitive view on the subject.
Asking this question helped me as I found out that all of the people who had watched me do my pitch felt that the ideas I had
shared were suitable for my target audience.
I thought this may be an important question to ask my audience seeing as I had included screenshots of the research I had done
for the campaign. I showed that I had researched canon’s previous work as well as another unrelated advert. I felt that getting
the opinions of others on if it were relevant was important.
What I found out from this question is that everyone who had watched me do my pitch felt that the research I had done for my
work was appropriate for the pitch I delivered.
This was absolutely an important question for those who had watched me do my pitch because they're all people who have done
research into canon as well. Therefore they would know if the ideas I had presented were right for the client we all were working
for.
Thankfully, everyone who responded to my survey found my ideas to be suitable for the client, ‘canon’.
Seeing as everyone who watched me do my pitch were within my target audience I asked this question so I could find out just
how appealing my idea was to those within my target audience/my peers.
What I found out from this question was that my idea is appealing to everyone who watched my pitch, which I know seeing as all
of the responses I got said that my idea was 10/10 when it comes to appeal.
Within my pitch I included a page where I included fonts and colour schemes I planned on using seeing as this is an important
quality within an advert. I asked this question just to see if the colour schemes and fonts I had included were relevant for the
product I plan on making.
From this question I found out that everyone who took my survey found that these details that I will include within work were
suitable for the products I am going to be making for the client.
I asked the question above just so I could get some written feedback from those who had watched me to do my pitch. What I
found out from this question is that people found my pitch detailed with appropriate research included within in. They also liked
the theme of my ideas, feeling that I had kept my demographic in mind when coming up with ideas. They liked that my ideas
relate to the people and their culture.
Similarly to the last question I asked this question so I could get some feedback from my audience about what I could have
possibly done better in my pitch and the only feedback that I really got from this is that I could have expanded on how my idea
actually related to Canon as a brand and that I should have more confidence in my work when presenting seeing as my pitch was
detailed and well done.

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Feedback on pitch survey

  • 2. Firstly, I asked this question as I felt it was important to ask if those who had viewed my pitch actually enjoyed the ideas I had delivered. All who viewed my pitch were within the target audience I stated so their feedback was important to me to gather their opinions. What I found out from this questions was that everyone who had been there to watch me deliver my pitch had enjoyed the ideas I had shared during it.
  • 3. Secondly, I then felt it was necessary to ask those who had viewed my pitch if they felt that the ideas I had produced and shared were actually suitable for the target audience I had shared during the actual pitch. This is important seeing as they are all doing the same pitch as myself, so they have an incitive view on the subject. Asking this question helped me as I found out that all of the people who had watched me do my pitch felt that the ideas I had shared were suitable for my target audience.
  • 4. I thought this may be an important question to ask my audience seeing as I had included screenshots of the research I had done for the campaign. I showed that I had researched canon’s previous work as well as another unrelated advert. I felt that getting the opinions of others on if it were relevant was important. What I found out from this question is that everyone who had watched me do my pitch felt that the research I had done for my work was appropriate for the pitch I delivered.
  • 5. This was absolutely an important question for those who had watched me do my pitch because they're all people who have done research into canon as well. Therefore they would know if the ideas I had presented were right for the client we all were working for. Thankfully, everyone who responded to my survey found my ideas to be suitable for the client, ‘canon’.
  • 6. Seeing as everyone who watched me do my pitch were within my target audience I asked this question so I could find out just how appealing my idea was to those within my target audience/my peers. What I found out from this question was that my idea is appealing to everyone who watched my pitch, which I know seeing as all of the responses I got said that my idea was 10/10 when it comes to appeal.
  • 7. Within my pitch I included a page where I included fonts and colour schemes I planned on using seeing as this is an important quality within an advert. I asked this question just to see if the colour schemes and fonts I had included were relevant for the product I plan on making. From this question I found out that everyone who took my survey found that these details that I will include within work were suitable for the products I am going to be making for the client.
  • 8. I asked the question above just so I could get some written feedback from those who had watched me to do my pitch. What I found out from this question is that people found my pitch detailed with appropriate research included within in. They also liked the theme of my ideas, feeling that I had kept my demographic in mind when coming up with ideas. They liked that my ideas relate to the people and their culture.
  • 9. Similarly to the last question I asked this question so I could get some feedback from my audience about what I could have possibly done better in my pitch and the only feedback that I really got from this is that I could have expanded on how my idea actually related to Canon as a brand and that I should have more confidence in my work when presenting seeing as my pitch was detailed and well done.