2. Survey
When making my pitch I wanted to gain feedback from my peers to
ensure that my idea fit the target audience as they are within the age
bracket of 16-25,by making a survey this has allowed me to see any
improvements that may need completing within my pitch.
By gaining audience feedback this allows me to make appropriate
changes to my pitch to ensure that my pitch gets the message across in
the right way and ensures that all ideas are seen in the way that they are
meant to be seen. I have included relevant questions to my pitch which
involve both improvements and what I have done well, once again this
allows me to see what I have done well in my pitch.
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3. Question 1: Is it clear who the client is?
For my first question i asked my peers:
Is it clear who the client is?:
By asking this question I can see that
100% said yes
0% said no
I decided to ask this question in my survey as it
allows me to see if I went into enough detail
about the client as I want to ensure that my
target audience is aware of who Sunderland
Culture are and how my documentary Is inline
with the brief that they have given.
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4. Question 2: Do you think my idea fits the
brief?
For my second question I asked my peers:
Do you think my idea fits the brief?
By asking this I can see that:
100% said yes
0% said no
I believe that asking this question was important as it
is to see if my whole idea for my documentary fits the
brief. Before I asked my peers about my idea I felt as
though it had fit the brief that we have been given,
and by asking this question I am able to see that I had
made the right decision with my idea.
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5. Question 3: Does my idea appeal to you?
For my third question I asked my peers:
Does my ideal appeal to you?
By asking this question I can see that:
100% said yes
0% said no
By asking this question this allows me to gain a better
understanding on if my idea appeals to the target
audience. By choosing music as my main subject in my
documentary this allows me to reach my target audience
ad music is very present within this day and age whether
its in the background or playing on the radio.
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6. Question 4: What do you like about my
idea?
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For my fourth question I asked my peers:
What do you like about my idea?
From asking this question i can see that:
Ideas are shown clearly
Links to brief
Visual ideas
Plenty of images
Fits the target audience
Loads of pictures
By asking this question it allows me to see what I have done
well in my pitch. This has helped me see what don’t need to
improve within my pitch and allows me to focus on
improvements that have been voiced by my peers.
7. Question 5: What could I improve on?
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For my final question I asked my peers
What could I improve on?
From asking this question I can see that:
More information on Sunderland
Nothing
More planning ideas
Nothing
More on target audience
By asking this question I am able to see what needs
improving within my pitch. I believe that this was an
important question to ask as my peers are within my
target audience, I am able to see what appeals to them
and what didn’t in my pitch
