The feedback provider enjoyed the creativity and detail in the map images but felt the characters lacked depth and polish compared to the other elements. It was unclear what art style was being used since the pieces had a mix of realistic, pixelated, and cartoon graphics. To better showcase it as a game, additions like HUDs, menus and a start page were recommended. While the maps were a favorite part, improving the characters to match their quality level would make the overall work more consistent and professional.

1. Feedback

3. Questions
1.What are some aspects you like about my work and why?
I like the creativity in the images and characters and images, it looks very smooth organic.
2.How can I improve my work to make it better?
The images may look very smooth and organic but it looks a little amateur so I would say maybe adding a lot more detail on it and it doesn’t look
original at all besides the images of the two characters and terrain.
3.Can you think of anything that I could make to go with these to show off the game more?
Maybe an opening menu or something like that or a health bar customized to look more detailed and more like the games theme.
4.What is your most and least favorite aspect, why? I like the creativity in two characters because you can tell its original. maybe If it had more
detail on it , it could be a very good. My least favorite aspect is that the images look like they all have been stolen from google and they lack detail
and nothing really looks special and different to most pixelated games. I don’t really get what the game is about and nothing really sticks out.

4. Questions
1.What are some aspects you like about my work and why?
I really like the 2D map design on the top left image, I feel it is very detailed and the pixel art works really well. I also like the head you created as
it looks very realistic.
2.How can I improve my work to make it better?
I'm not sure what style of artwork you are going for in your game. You have a mix of realistic graphics, pixel art and cartoon. I feel you need to
establish a specific art style and work from there as the mix of graphics wont work together in my opinion.
3.Can you think of anything that I could make to go with these to show off the game more?
I feel you need to add some HUD’s, menus and a start page to show that it is an actual game. By doing this you would also be able to give people
and idea of wat kind of game it is as currently its hard to know what kind of game this is.
4.What is your most and least favorite aspect, why?
My favourite aspect is the 2D pixel art map in the top left as I feel it looks very professional and detailed. My least favourite aspect is the
characters in the top right as I feel they look somewhat amateur in comparison to the background. It would be a shame to take away from the
background with the characters that don’t match the artsyle.

5. Questions
1.What are some aspects you like about my work and why?
I personally enjoy the creative art work behind the map images I feel they’re very in detail and layered. I also like the colour schemes very earthy
and neuteral, and all the images work well together. I like the pop of pink, I feel this will keep the reader/audience engaged.
2.How can I improve my work to make it better?
To improve these products, I would say that the two characters in the back need improvement and creating more depth to the same level as the
other products. But still very impressive.
3.Can you think of anything that I could make to go with these to show off the game more?
More naturalistic backgrounds, like a lake or a river just to add to the overall feel of the piece, this would just add more background enviorments
for the reader to look at whilst playing the game.
4.What is your most and least favorite aspect, why?
I would say that the characters need improvement to bring them up to the level of the other products and would make the game seem more
professional, but the rest I think is excellent and is very creative.