Passive voice can create problems in a criminal justice report because it does not clarify who did what.

1. CRIMINAL JUSTICE REPORT
WRITING
THE HOW AND WHY
Part 11
Active and Passive Voice
in Police Reports

2. CRIMINAL JUSTICE REPORT
WRITING
THE HOW AND WHY
Part 11
Active Voice and Passive
Voice in Police Reports

3. Officers can write sentences in either active
voice or passive voice.
Active voice: I questioned Boaz about the
argument.
Passive voice: Boaz was questioned about
the argument by me.

4. Criminal justice professionals used to believe
that writing in passive voice made them more
trustworthy and objective.
Not true.

5. Trustworthiness and objectivity are character
traits. They come from your commitment to
excellence and professionalism.

6. Writing in passive voice does not enhance your
professionalism or integrity..

7. And there’s an important reason for avoiding
passive voice in your reports:
Passive-voice sentences often don’t tell who
did the action.
Passive: Figueroa was arrested.
Active: I arrested Figueroa.

8. This who-did-what problem is especially serious
when you’re preparing to testify in court.
Suppose, for example, you were working a
scene with another officer. Passive-voice
sentences don’t show what each officer did.
Judy was interviewed. [Who interviewed her?]
Barry was patted down. [Who patted him
down?]

9. One more caution: Don’t assume that every is
or was sentence is passive voice.
The family was on vacation in Acapulco.
ACTIVE
The car is a light-blue, 2009 Yaris hatchback.
ACTIVE
Peter was sleeping in the back bedroom.
ACTIVE

10. It’s important to follow this rule in every report:
Make sure each sentence clearly shows who
was acting or speaking.

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