The client provided feedback to the writer at three different meetings/communications to improve the structure and formatting of their script. The first meeting included recommendations to add a school address, scene numbers, split descriptions before character entrances, remove brackets from directions, and include character emotions. The second meeting focused on shortening two scene descriptions. An email then confirmed the client was happy with the final script and approved it for publication.

1. Client Feedback
First meeting – 4/12/18
In myfirstmeetingwiththe clienttheytoldme thattoimprove myscriptI needto adda school
address andadd scene numbers before the scene description.Ialsoneedtosplitthe description
until a character enters.The clientalsotoldme thatI neednobracketson directionsandtheyneed
to be put to the left.Tofurtherimprove the structure of my scriptI alsoneedtoput the emotions of
the character nextto character name.Finally,Ineedto include lessdetail inthe scene description to
make it easiertounderstand
Second Meeting – 10/12/18
My secondmeetingwiththe clientwentwell the onlythingsIneededtoadjustwastoshortenthe
scene 2 description tomake sure I donot explainwhathashappenedbefore the dialogue does.
FinallyIalsoneedtoshortenmyscene 4 descriptionandexplainthatBillyismakingaphone call,
thenI justneedto put textmessage inbrackets nexttoJess’ text.
Email 18/02/18
Thisis the email thatshowsthe client ishappywithmyfinal scriptand isok forme to publishit.