1. Client Feedback
Meeting 1 13/12/18
Actionsdon’tneedtobe in brackets – perhapsjustgo aheadand explainwhatthe action
is/whathe isdoing.
NAME THE CHARACTERSAGAIN SOTHERE IS NO CONFUSION HERE
don’thave brackets – justgo aheadand saywhat he is doingand perhapsindicate he isbeing
cautiousbyhis actionsratherput thisinbrackets.
Grammar ‘to see there isnothingthere’,
The main things to work on are that the actions don’t need to be in brackets, character
names need to start with capital letters. Indicate character movement through their actions
rather than putting in brackets what they have done. And also to work on grammar.
Edit: Following on from the feedback I have corrected grammar with some of the words in
my script, I have also taken away brackets that aren’t needed and instead explained the
action that they are doing.
Meeting 2 20/12/18
Layout of the script needs to be altered so that it is more structured, and looks like a
conventional script.
Adding information on the first slide about the name of the script, the address at
which it was written and developed and contact details.
Remove bracketsaroundaboutactionsthat don’tneedbrackets.
Go throughand adjustthe positioningof paragraphsand Linessothat it isclearwhat they
are.Eg scene titles,dialogueandscene descriptions.
From thisfeedbackIhave changedthe waythat my scriptisformattedina more professional
manner,thisincludesputtingcertaindialogue incertainplaces,addedscene locationsandadded
informationonthe firstslide.
