The document contains feedback from a client about improvements needed for a script. The first meeting notes indicate the client wanted scene numbers added, character entrances to split descriptions, directions to the left in brackets, and character emotions included. A second meeting saw the client suggest shortening scene 2's description and explaining a phone call in scene 4 via brackets. An email to the client to confirm the script addressed the feedback received a positive reply.

1. Client Feedback
First meeting – 4/12/18
In myfirstmeetingwiththe clienttheytoldme thattoimprove myscriptI needto adda school
address andadd scene numbers before the scene description.Ialsoneedtosplitthe description
until a character enters.The clientalsotoldme thatI neednobracketson directionsandtheyneed
to be put to the left.Tofurtherimprove the structure of my scriptI alsoneedtoput the emotions of
the character nextto character name.Finally,Ineedto include lessdetail inthe scene description to
make it easiertounderstand
Second Meeting – 10/12/18
My secondmeetingwiththe clientwentwell the onlythingsIneededtoadjustwastoshortenthe
scene 2 description tomake sure I donot explainwhathashappenedbefore the dialogue does.
FinallyIalsoneedtoshortenmyscene 4 descriptionandexplainthatBillyismakingaphone call,
thenI justneedto put textmessage inbrackets nexttoJess’ text.
Email – 18/12/2018
This is the email I sent to the client to make sure my script was ok to submit. The reply is
also below.