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The client provided feedback from two meetings. In the first meeting, they recommended removing brackets from character actions, capitalizing character names for clarity, indicating movements through actions rather than brackets, and improving grammar. In the second meeting, they advised restructuring the script layout to look more conventional, adding identifying information to the first slide, removing unnecessary brackets from actions, and adjusting paragraph positioning and lines for clarity of scene titles, dialogue, and descriptions.
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Client feedback
- 1. Client Feedback Meeting 1 Actions don’t need to be in brackets – perhaps justgo ahead and explain whatthe action is/what he is doing. NAME THE CHARACTERS AGAINSO THERE IS NO CONFUSIONHERE don’t havebrackets – justgo ahead and say what he is doing and perhaps indicate he is being cautious by his actions rather put this in brackets. grammar ‘to see there is nothing there’, The main things to work on are that the actions don’t need to be in brackets, character names need to start with capital letters. Indicate character movement through their actions rather than putting in brackets what they have done. And also to work on grammar. Meeting 2 Layout of the script needs to be altered so that it is more structured, and looks like a conventional script. Adding information on the first slide about the name of the script, the address at which it was written and developed and contact details. Remove bracketsaroundaboutactionsthat don’tneedbrackets. Go throughand adjustthe positioningof paragraphsand Linessothat it isclearwhat they are.Eg scene titles,dialogueandscene descriptions.